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REVising&editing

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© 2024 miss ashy's class games

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© 2024 Miss ashy's class games

After the Great Grammar Upheaval of 2035, this universe was doomed to a fate of eternal improper grammar. Today, in 2124, grammatical errors still litter the glaxies... but the prophecy of a savior who knows how to revise and edit has been long fortold.Could that be... you?

backstory

wormy

Mr. Toad

Krys

NORMANDY

Mentor these four brave heroes in order to save the galaxy.

CHARACTERS

4 FROG

3 BARS

PASSWORD?

2 PUZZLE

1 SHIPS

Complete the missions to obtain the password numbers.

MISSIONS

C. London loves watching television, for he hates soap operas.

B. London loves watching television, so he hates soap operas.

A. London loves watching television, but he hates soap operas.

How could you combine these two sentences?London loves watching television. He hates soap operas.

LEVEL 1/5

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c. We could drive to san francisco, yet we could take an airplane.

b. We could drive to san francisco, or we could take an airplane.

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a. We could drive to san francisco, so we could take an airplane.

How could you combine these two sentences?We could drive to San Francisco. We could take an airplane.

LEVEL 2/5

c. Unless suzie wanted to go to the movies, she didn't ask permission.

b. Because suzie wanted to go to the movies, she didn't ask permission.

a. Although suzie wanted to go to the movies, she didn't ask permission.

How could you combine these two sentences?Suzie wanted to go to the movies. She didn't ask permission.

LEVEL 3/5

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c. jack couldn't find his map, so he asked for directions instead.

b. jack couldn't find his map, yet he asked for directions instead.

a. Jack couldn't find his map, and he asked for directions instead.

How could you combine these two sentences?Jack couldn't find his map. He asked for directions instead.

LEVEL 4/5

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c. Asayo didn't want to get out of bed she didn't want to go to school, either.

b. asayo didn't want to get out of bed, nor did she want to go to school.

a. asayo didn't want to get out of bed nor did she want to go to school.

How could you combine these two sentences?Asayo didn't want to get out of bed. She didn't want to go to school, either.

LEVEL 5/5

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THE SECRET NUMBER FOR THIS MISSION IS 4

CONGRATULATIONS!

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CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 FROG

3 BARS

2 PUZZLE

1 SHIPS

Complete the missions to obtain thepassword numbers.

MISSIONS

4

Complete the missions to find the secret numbers in the password.

c. on april 16 2024, we'll take the reading staar test.

b. on april 16, 2024, we'll take the reading staar test.

a. on april 16, 2024 we'll take the reading staar test.

WORMY

How should you correct this sentence?On April 16 2024 we'll take the Reading STAAR test.

LEVEL 1/5

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c. riley did his homework but he forgot to turn it in.

b. riley did his homework. he forgot to turn it in.

a. riley did his homework, he forgot to turn it in.

WORMINGTON

How should you correct this sentence?Riley did his homework he forgot to turn it in.

LEVEL 2/5

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c. hannah on the other hand. turned her homework in on time.

b. hannah on the other hand, turned her homework in on time.

a. hannah, on the other hand, turned her homework in on time.

WORMINA

How should you correct this sentence?Hannah on the other hand turned her homework in on time.

LEVEL 3/5

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c. although she wanted to come to camp, she decided to stay home.

b. although, she wanted to come to camp. she decided to stay home.

a. although she wanted to come to camp. she decided to stay home.

WORMANTHA

How should you correct this sentence?Although she wanted to come to camp she decided to stay home.

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c. parker's chair tipped over when he leaned back too far.

b. Parkers' chair tipped over when he leaned back too far.

WORMIO

a. parkers chair tipped over, when he leaned back too far.

How should you correct this sentence?Parkers chair tipped over when he leaned back too far.

LEVEL 5/5

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THE SECRET NUMBER FOR THIS MISSION IS 7

CONGRATULATIONS!

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yes

CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 FROG

3 BARS

2 PUZZLE

1 SHIPS

Complete the missions to obtain the password numbers.

MISsIONS

47

Complete the missions to find the secret numbers in the password.

c. i need to by groceries from the store.

b. I need to Bye groceries from the store.

a. i need to buy groceries from the store.

Which homophone should you use?I need to _____ groceries from the store.

LEVEL 1/5

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c. mya and aaliyah road their bikes home.

b. Mya and aaliyah rode their bikes home.

a. Mya and aaliyah rowed their bikes home.

Which homophone should you use?Mya and Aaliyah _____ their bikes home.

LEVEL 2/5

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c. always remember to sight your evidence in your writing.

b. always remember to site your evidence in your writing.

a. always remember to cite your evidence in your writing.

Which homophone should you use?Always remember to _____ your evidence in your writing.

LEVEL 3/5

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c. there's no such thing as too many books.

b. there's no such thing as to many books.

a. there's no such thing as two many books.

Which homophone should you use?There's no such thing as _____ many books.

LEVEL 4/5

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c. we went to their house for dinner.

b. we went to they're house for dinner.

a. we went to there house for dinner.

Which homophone should you use?We went to _____ house for dinner.

LEVEL 5/5

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THE SECRET NUMBER FOR THIS MISSION IS 1

CONGRATULATIONS!

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yes

CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 FROG

3 BARS

2 PUZZLE

1 SHIPS

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MISsIONS

471

Complete the missions to find the secret numbers in the password.

c. afnaan and claire play basketball at recess.

b. afnaan and claire playing basketball at recess.

a. afnaan and claire plays basketball at recess.

Choose the correct verb to fill in the blank.Afnaan and Claire _____ basketball at recess.

LEVEL 1/3

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c. one of jaxon's pencils ALWAYS broken easily.

b. one of jaxon's pencils ALWAYS breaks easily.

a. One of jaxon's pencils ALWayS break easily.

Choose the correct verb to fill in the blank.One of Jaxon's pencils always _____ easily.

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c. my family goes to a baseball game every year.

b. my family gos to a baseball game every year.

a. my family go to a baseball game every year.

Choose the correct verb to fill in the blank.My family _____ to a baseball game every year.

LEVEL 3/3

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THE secret NUMBER for THIS MISSION IS 9

CONGRATULATIONS!

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CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 FROG

3 BARS

2 PUZZLE

1 SHIPS

Complete the missions to obtain the password numbers.

MISsIONS

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RESTART

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COMPLETED

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CONTINUE

Guide NORMANDY as it flies through the galaxy and faces tough questions on how to combine sentences.

MISsIONSHIPS

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WORMY graduated at the top of his class at Space Worm University (SWU). He is accredited for his dedication to study and rediscover the lost art of proper grammar; although, this has caused him to have trouble fitting in with the other worms. Even so, he travels the galaxy in search of the prophecy's savior.

WORMY

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KRYS is a microscopic alien that travels the galaxy by bouncing on her flying saucer. KRYS's grammar knowledge was wiped out in 2035, and she has been unable to write or speak with proper grammar since then. Her inability to communite clearly with others has fostered her growing loneliness.

KRYS

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WORMY has finally found who he thinks is the savior of the galaxy: you! Help him fit in with the other worms (literally) by answering these punctuation questions.

MISSIONpuzzle

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Help KRYS bounce on her saucer to clear the path to freedom! She must choose the correct homophones, but she can't do it alone.

Missionbars

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CONTINUE

MR. TOAD is one street away from reuniting with his family. Help him cross by answering questions about subject-verb agreement.

MISSIONleapfrog

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MR. TOAD is the lone survivor of his squad after a rescue mission gone horribly wrong. He has long forgotten what the "MR." in his name is an abbreviation for; he has lost his sense of self. The space toad longs to go back to his grassy homeland, where his wife and 24 tadpoles await him.

MR.Toad

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NORMANDY is the galaxy's fastest ship. Because of its intense speed, it has no passengers and an AI pilot. However, grammar rules and mechanics were wiped from AI knowledge in the Great Grammar Upheaval decades ago. It can't help but feel... incomplete without this knowledge...

normandy

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