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Introduction

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Before you begin editing your essays, you will practice the skills you need to make your essay better.

INTRODUCTION

Tetris

Frogger

Pong

Spaceship

Pick a character to beat the game and escape!

CHARACTERS

4 grammar + puctuation

3 word choice

2 organization

1 Thesis

Complete the missions to obtain the password numbers

MISSIONS

Restate thesis + SO what? + Mic Drop

Answer the prompt + Because

Answer the prompt + because + Three reasons why

Which of the following is the thesis statement formula?

LEVEL 1/5

X

Because

Last two reasons why

X

Answer the prompt

What is this thesis statement missing?Dogs make excellent pets because they provide companionship.

LEVEL 2/5

Three reasons why

Because

Answer the prompt

What is this thesis statement missing?because it has both positive and negative impacts on teenagers' mental health, influencing their self-esteem, social interactions, and overall well-being.

LEVEL 3/5

X

Be more specific

Shorten the sentence

Add another reason

How would you make this thesis statement better?Students should not be allowed to have their phones because it is bad, they don't need them in school, and they should put them in their backpacks.

LEVEL 4/5

X

It's just a part of essay writing that you have to do

it shows your reader where the essay is headed

it's not ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Why is a thesis statement important?

LEVEL 5/5

X

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 1

CONGRATULATIONS!

NO

yes

CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 Grammar+Punctuation

3 Word choice

2 Organization

1 Thesis

Complete the missions to obtain thepassword numbers

MISSIONS

Education empowers individuals

Education promotes social equality

Education is essential

NEXT

Based on the thesis statement below, what will this essay's third body paragraph be about?Access to quality education is essential for every child because it empowers individuals, reduces poverty, and promotes social equality.

LEVEL 1/5

X

pollution is a big issue

Recycling programs are important because they conserve resources

recycling programs are important because they reduce waste

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Based on the thesis statement below, what will this essay's second body paragraph be about?Recycling programs should be implemented in every community because they help reduce waste, conserve resources, and mitigate environmental pollution.

LEVEL 2/5

X

Learning financial literacy is important

Learning financial literacy helps you plan for the future

Learning financial literacy helps you manage money responsibly

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Based on the thesis statement below, what will this essay's first body paragraph be about?High school students should learn financial literacy skills because they prepare individuals for managing money responsibly, making informed decisions, and planning for the future.

LEVEL 3/5

X

Curfews for teenagers should be enforced by parents because they help ensure safety, promote responsible behavior, and establish boundaries.

Curfews for teenagers should be enforced by parents because they help ensure safety, establish boundaries, and promote responsible behavior.

NEXT

Which sentence will be the thesis statement of this essay based on the topic sentences below?Body 1: Curfews help ensure safety. Body 2:Curfews promote responsible behaviors.Body 3: Curfews establish boundaries.

LEVEL 4/5

X

All of the above

It helps keep your reader's attention

It makes your writing easier to follow

NEXT

It helps your writing make sense

Why is organization important in an essay?

LEVEL 5/5

X

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 2

CONGRATULATIONS!

NO

yes

CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 Grammar + Punctuation

3 Word Choice

2 Organization

1Thesis

Complete the missions to obtain the password numbers

MISsIONS

Limit

It

Very

What word could be cut from the following sentence?It is very important to limit your time spent on social media.

LEVEL 1/5

X

To learn

I Think

it is

Which words can be cut from the following sentence?I think it is important to learn sign language.

LEVEL 2/5

X

Fun

Cold

Amazing

Choose a better word to replace the phrase "very cool" in the following sentence.Going to the Smithsonian is on my bucket list because the exhibits are very cool.

LEVEL 3/5

X

She was angry because her brother stole her candy.

She was sort of upset with her brother.

Because her brother was interested in thievery, she was super upset with him and his ways.

Pick the strongest sentence below.

LEVEL 4/5

X

The St. Louis Cardinals embody resilience and excellence, consistently showcasing prowess both on the field and in their unwavering commitment to their storied legacy.

The St. Louis Cardinals are amazing, always putting the best teams together, filled with top notch players from all over the world.

THe st. louis cardinals are the best in MLB.

Pick the strongest sentence below.

LEVEL 5/5

X

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 3

CONGRATULATIONS!

NO

yes

CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 grammar + puctuation

3 word choice

2 Organization

1 thesis

Complete the missions to obtain thenumbers of the password

MISIONES

John, could you please pass the salt?

John could you please pass the salt?

John, could you please, pass the salt?

Which sentence is correct?

LEVEL 1/3

X

I bought apples, oranges bananas and grapes at the grocery store.

I bought apples, oranges, bananas, and grapes at the grocery store.

I bought apples, oranges, bananas, and grapes at the grosery store.

Which sentence is correct?

LEVEL 2/3

X

My dog, a golden retriever, loves to play fetch in the park.

My dog a golden retriever, loves to play fetch in the park.

My dog, an golden retriever, loves to play fetch in the park.

Which sentence is correct?

LEVEL 3/3

X

THE NUMBER OF THIS MISSION IS 4

CONGRATULATIONS!

NO

yes

CONTINUE?

GAME OVER

4 Grammar + punctuaton

3 Word choice

2 organization

1 thesis

Complete the missions to obtain thepassword numbers

MISsIONS

RESTART

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You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

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yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

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yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

CONTINUE

Use your knowledge of thesis statements to answer the following questions.

Thesis

X

Use this character to beat the game and escape!

tetris

X

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

Use this character to beat the game and escape!

pong

X

CONTINUE

Use your knowledge of organization to answer the following questions.

organization

X

CONTINUE

Use your knowledge of word choice to answer the following questions.

Word choice

X

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

CONTINUE

Use your knowledge on grammar and punctuation to answer the following questions.

Grammar + Punctuation

X

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

Use this character to beat the game and escape!

Frogger

X

Use this character to beat the game and escape!

Spaceship

X

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?

NO

yes

You will lose all the progress

Are you sure you want to exit?