Revising and Editing Escape Room
Lacey Lee
Created on January 31, 2024
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Transcript
MUSEUM
ESCAPE ROOM
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Someone has stolenall the works fromthe museum
Oh, no!
Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.
ROOM 3
ROOM 1
ROOM 2
Mainroom
Yes, our student teacher helped with the project.What is the correct way to punctuate the boldfaced text?
Question 1
1/5
Yes our student,
Correct as is
Yes our, student
ROOM 1
COMMAS
We were careless with the pitcher and water spilled everywhere.
Question 2
2/5
the pitcher and, water
the pitcher, and water
the pitcher. And water
ROOM 1
COMMAS
As the boat drifted into the weeds Kyle tugged on his line.
Question 3
3/5
Correct as is
, the weeds Kyle
the weeds, Kyle
ROOM 1
COMMAS
After soccer practice with the other class we left the field.
Question 4
4/5
with the other class, we
with the other class. We
, with the other class we
ROOM 1
COMMAS
With a shake of his mane and a roar the lion approached the bars of the cage.
Question 5
5/5
mane and, a roar,
mane, and a roar
mane and a roar,
ROOM 1
COMMAS
You have completed this room!
5/5
CONTINUe
ROOM 1
COMMAS
You have lost a museum piece!
ROOM 1
COMMAS
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room 3
room 1
room 2
mainroom
Someone has stolenall the works fromthe museum
Oh, no!
Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.
1/5
Question 1
It is nearly 6:00 and traffic is heavy we cannot reach town before sunset. What change should be made to this sentence?
Add a semicolon after 6:00.
Add a semicolon after heavy.
ROOM 2
SEMICOLONS
2/5
Question 2
Margery arranged the flowers and ferns beautifully we delivered the bouquets today. What change should be made to this sentence?
Add a semicolon after ferns.
Add a semicolon after beautifully.
ROOM 2
SEMICOLONS
3/5
Question 3
The general gave a clear command consequently the troops set off to survey the scene. Which sentence is correctly punctuated?
The general gave a clear command; consequently, the troops set off to survey the scene.
The general gave a clear command; consequently the troops set off to survey the scene.
ROOM 2
SEMICOLONS
4/5
Question 4
This afternoon event includes visits to the following locations: The Museum of Modern Art, Manhattan; the Museum of the Moving Image, Queens; and the Carriage, Stony Brook. What change should be made to this sentence?
Replace the semicolons with commas
Make no change
ROOM 2
SEMICOLONS
5/5
Question 5
Time has expired on the parking meter as a result, I must leave you. What change should be made to this sentence?
Time has expired on the parking meter; as a result, I must leave you.
Time has expired on the parking meter, as a result, I must leave you.
ROOM 2
SEMICOLONS
5/5
CONTINUE
ROOM 2
SEMICOLONS
You have completed this room!
You have lost a museum piece!
ROOM 2
SEMICOLONS
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room 3
room 1
room 2
mainroom
Someone has stolenall the works fromthe museum
Oh, no!
Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.
1/5
Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?
Question 1
ROOM 3
CAPITALIZATION
2/5
Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?
Question 2
ROOM 3
CAPITALIZATION
3/5
Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?
Question 3
ROOM 3
CAPITALIZATION
4/5
Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?
Question 4
ROOM 3
CAPITALIZATION
5/5
Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?
Question 5
ROOM 3
CAPITALIZATION
5/5
CONTINUE
ROOM 3
CAPITALIZATION
You have completed this room!
You have lost a museum piece!
ROOM 3
CAPITALIZATION
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room 3
room 1
room 2
main room
Someone has stolenall the works fromthe museum
Oh, no!
Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.
1/5
(1) In a rush to get to play rehearsal, Ellen threw her books into her locker. (2) She couldn’t wait to work on her scene. (3) Alex, on the other hand, took much longer. (4) He had forgotten to practice his lines last night.Which transition could you use to combine the ideas in the third and fourth sentences?
Question 1
since
as a result
yet
main room - Transitions
2/5
(1) In a rush to get to play rehearsal, Ellen threw her books into her locker. (2) She couldn’t wait to work on her scene. (3) Alex, on the other hand, took much longer. (4) He had forgotten to practice his lines last night.Which of the following sentences uses a transition?
Question 2
Sentence 3
Sentence 2
Sentence 1
main room - Transitions
3/5
(1) Schools have an important role in teaching students how to eat right. (2) Students should study the benefits of a nutritious, well-balanced diet in health class. (3) The school cafeteria should offer students a variety of healthy food options. (4) As a result, students will begin to develop healthier eating habits.Which of the following sentences includes a transition?
Question 3
Sentence 3
Sentence 1
Sentence 4
main room - Transitions
4/5
(1) Schools have an important role in teaching students how to eat right. (2) Students should study the benefits of a nutritious, well-balanced diet in health class. (3) The school cafeteria should offer students a variety of healthy food options. (4) As a result, students will begin to develop healthier eating habits. Which transition should begin sentence 3 to show how this sentence relates to sentence 2?
Question 4
Mainly
Also
Eventually
main room - Transitions
5/5
Reforestation efforts, while undeniably valuable, often result in forests with limited biodiversity. _____ care should be taken to plant a wide variety of native flora in depleted woodlands.Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition?
Question 5
Furthermore
Accordingly
However
main room - Transitions
5/5
main room - Transitions
You have completed this room!
CONTINUe
Congratulations!
Start Over?
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!
You have lost a museum piece!