Revising and Editing Escape Room

ESCAPE ROOM

MUSEUM

Main room

ROOM 2

ROOM 1

ROOM 3

Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.

Oh, no!

Someone has stolen all the works from the museum

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COMMAS

ROOM 1

Yes our, student

Correct as is

Yes our student,

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Question 1

Yes, our student teacher helped with the project.What is the correct way to punctuate the boldfaced text?

COMMAS

ROOM 1

the pitcher. And water

the pitcher, and water

the pitcher and, water

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Question 2

We were careless with the pitcher and water spilled everywhere.

COMMAS

ROOM 1

the weeds, Kyle

, the weeds Kyle

Correct as is

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Question 3

As the boat drifted into the weeds Kyle tugged on his line.

COMMAS

ROOM 1

, with the other class we

with the other class. We

with the other class, we

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Question 4

After soccer practice with the other class we left the field.

COMMAS

ROOM 1

mane and a roar,

mane, and a roar

mane and, a roar,

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Question 5

With a shake of his mane and a roar the lion approached the bars of the cage.

COMMAS

ROOM 1

CONTINUe

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You have completed this room!

COMMAS

ROOM 1

You have lost a museum piece!

Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.

Oh, no!

Someone has stolen all the works from the museum

main room

room 2

room 1

room 3

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SEMICOLONS

ROOM 2

Add a semicolon after heavy.

Add a semicolon after 6:00.

It is nearly 6:00 and traffic is heavy we cannot reach town before sunset. What change should be made to this sentence?

Question 1

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SEMICOLONS

ROOM 2

Add a semicolon after beautifully.

Add a semicolon after ferns.

Margery arranged the flowers and ferns beautifully we delivered the bouquets today. What change should be made to this sentence?

Question 2

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SEMICOLONS

ROOM 2

The general gave a clear command; consequently the troops set off to survey the scene.

The general gave a clear command; consequently, the troops set off to survey the scene.

The general gave a clear command consequently the troops set off to survey the scene. Which sentence is correctly punctuated?

Question 3

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SEMICOLONS

ROOM 2

Make no change

Replace the semicolons with commas

This afternoon event includes visits to the following locations: The Museum of Modern Art, Manhattan; the Museum of the Moving Image, Queens; and the Carriage, Stony Brook. What change should be made to this sentence?

Question 4

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SEMICOLONS

ROOM 2

Time has expired on the parking meter, as a result, I must leave you.

Time has expired on the parking meter; as a result, I must leave you.

Time has expired on the parking meter as a result, I must leave you. What change should be made to this sentence?

Question 5

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You have completed this room!

SEMICOLONS

ROOM 2

CONTINUE

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SEMICOLONS

ROOM 2

You have lost a museum piece!

Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.

Oh, no!

Someone has stolen all the works from the museum

main room

room 2

room 1

room 3

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CAPITALIZATION

ROOM 3

Question 1

Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?

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CAPITALIZATION

ROOM 3

Question 2

Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?

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CAPITALIZATION

ROOM 3

Question 3

Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?

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CAPITALIZATION

ROOM 3

Question 4

Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?

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CAPITALIZATION

ROOM 3

Question 5

Which answer choice is correctly capitalized?

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You have completed this room!

CAPITALIZATION

ROOM 3

CONTINUE

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CAPITALIZATION

ROOM 3

You have lost a museum piece!

Please help us find our lost works by correctly working through the problems in each room.

Oh, no!

Someone has stolen all the works from the museum

main room

room 2

room 1

room 3

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main room - Transitions

yet

as a result

since

Question 1

(1) In a rush to get to play rehearsal, Ellen threw her books into her locker. (2) She couldn’t wait to work on her scene. (3) Alex, on the other hand, took much longer. (4) He had forgotten to practice his lines last night. Which transition could you use to combine the ideas in the third and fourth sentences?

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main room - Transitions

Sentence 1

Sentence 2

Sentence 3

Question 2

(1) In a rush to get to play rehearsal, Ellen threw her books into her locker. (2) She couldn’t wait to work on her scene. (3) Alex, on the other hand, took much longer. (4) He had forgotten to practice his lines last night. Which of the following sentences uses a transition?

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main room - Transitions

Sentence 4

Sentence 1

Sentence 3

Question 3

(1) Schools have an important role in teaching students how to eat right. (2) Students should study the benefits of a nutritious, well-balanced diet in health class. (3) The school cafeteria should offer students a variety of healthy food options. (4) As a result, students will begin to develop healthier eating habits. Which of the following sentences includes a transition?

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main room - Transitions

Eventually

Also

Mainly

Question 4

(1) Schools have an important role in teaching students how to eat right. (2) Students should study the benefits of a nutritious, well-balanced diet in health class. (3) The school cafeteria should offer students a variety of healthy food options. (4) As a result, students will begin to develop healthier eating habits. Which transition should begin sentence 3 to show how this sentence relates to sentence 2?

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main room - Transitions

However

Accordingly

Furthermore

Question 5

Reforestation efforts, while undeniably valuable, often result in forests with limited biodiversity. _____ care should be taken to plant a wide variety of native flora in depleted woodlands. Which choice completes the text with the most logical transition?

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CONTINUe

You have completed this room!

main room - Transitions

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Start Over?

Congratulations!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!

You have lost a museum piece!