Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a damaged environment setting description?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
travelled
Who/What
Sentence
I travelled.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Re-read
Build
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Check
I travelled through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
crossed
Subject
Sentence
I crossed.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Check
I crossed
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a damaged environment setting description?
Role on the Wall
Think
Then bring the character to life!
First
Say
Do
Feel
Illustration 1: Curiosity beginning to explore Mars
Illustration 1: Curiosity beginning to explore Mars
Describe
Behave
Your turn to write a damaged environment setting description.
Your turn to write a damaged environment setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a damaged environment setting description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly.
Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side.
Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat.
Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax.
Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards.
Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically.
Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm.
Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
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Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a damaged environment setting description?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
travelled
Who/What
Sentence
I travelled.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Re-read
Build
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Check
I travelled through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
crossed
Subject
Sentence
I crossed.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Check
I crossed
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a damaged environment setting description?
Role on the Wall
Think
Then bring the character to life!
First
Say
Do
Feel
Illustration 1: Curiosity beginning to explore Mars
Illustration 1: Curiosity beginning to explore Mars
Describe
Behave
Your turn to write a damaged environment setting description.
Your turn to write a damaged environment setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a damaged environment setting description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.