Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile and metaphor poem?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
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chap
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My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
turned
Who/What
the ground
Sentence
The ground turned.
Add Detail: relative clauses
where the machines were.
____________________________________
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
Re-read
Build
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
Check
where the machines were.
____________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
told
Subject
Sentence
I told them.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
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__________________________________________
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a simile and metaphor poem?
New words in our book
Click for definitions!
evidence of water
rough terrain
blast off
burning curiosity
sky crane manoeuvre
sky crane manoeuvre
Click for definitions!
juddering
precise
void
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Let's look at the front cover and the first part of Greta and the Giants up to 'they worked...all night until eventually...'.
When?
How?
Drama: Hot Seating
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
What would you liketo ask the villain?
My turn to write a simile and metaphor poem.
My turn to write a simile and metaphor poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a simile and metaphor poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Act it out?
Words that are similar?
Words that are opposite?
Say it?
Draw it?
Spell it?
Say it in a sentence?
a system that lowered the rover onto Mars using cables
Act it out?
Words that are similar?
Words that are opposite?
Say it?
Draw it?
Spell it?
Say it in a sentence?
uneven, rocky ground
where the machines were.
____________________________________
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly.
Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side.
Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat.
Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax.
Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards.
Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically.
Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm.
Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
uneven, rocky ground
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
uneven, rocky ground
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
FORMAL
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
INFORMAL
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
uneven, rocky ground
a very strong desire to know something
a system that lowered the rover onto Mars using cables
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
launch into space
proof that water existed
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile and metaphor poem?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
turned
Who/What
the ground
Sentence
The ground turned.
Add Detail: relative clauses
where the machines were.
____________________________________
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
Re-read
Build
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
Check
where the machines were.
____________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
told
Subject
Sentence
I told them.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a simile and metaphor poem?
New words in our book
Click for definitions!
evidence of water
rough terrain
blast off
burning curiosity
sky crane manoeuvre
sky crane manoeuvre
Click for definitions!
juddering
precise
void
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Let's look at the front cover and the first part of Greta and the Giants up to 'they worked...all night until eventually...'.
When?
How?
Drama: Hot Seating
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
What would you liketo ask the villain?
My turn to write a simile and metaphor poem.
My turn to write a simile and metaphor poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a simile and metaphor poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Act it out? Words that are similar? Words that are opposite? Say it? Draw it? Spell it? Say it in a sentence?
a system that lowered the rover onto Mars using cables
Act it out? Words that are similar? Words that are opposite? Say it? Draw it? Spell it? Say it in a sentence?
uneven, rocky ground
where the machines were.
____________________________________
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
uneven, rocky ground
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
uneven, rocky ground
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
________________________________________
________________________________________
FORMAL
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
__________________________________________
INFORMAL
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
uneven, rocky ground
a very strong desire to know something
a system that lowered the rover onto Mars using cables
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
launch into space
proof that water existed