Y2A Leo and the Octopus Write L10

Write Lesson 10

Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Portal Narrative?

Handwriting

Handwriting

thumb push

palm crouch

finger tap

finger lift

R E A D Y

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chap

chap

chap

chap

chap

chap

do

do

do

do

do

chap

chap

chap

My Turn

Your Turn

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Let me say the sentence before I click.

and

sun

needs

light

and

He

Say, Count, Build, Re-read

Click if correct

Check

He

sun

and

needs

light

My turn to write.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.

Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Click to move on.

Let me say the sentence before I click.

and

for

for

for

for

for

and

was

better

Say, Count, Build, Re-read

Click if correct

Check

was

for

for

and

better

for

for

for

My turn to write.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write. Let me say it. Now you write it.

Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

would be

Who/What

people

Sentence

People would be unhappy.

Add Detail: but

did

People

would

but

did

he

____

Re-read

Build

People

would

did

he

but

____

did

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Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Click to move on.

Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Portal Narrative?

My turn to write Part 1

plan

Sentence Checker

writer's voice

Working Wall

Watch me use my...

Your turn to write

Use the Sentence Checker

Use the Working Wall

Use your plan

Say before you write

Edit

Add

Re-read

Share, Edit, Review

Effect

Feel

Edit

Imagine

Sentence Choice

Word Choice

Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my narrative?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Put your hands in a crouch then your fingertips down. Keep your palms up high and crouch to the ground.

did

People

would

but

did

he

____

Start with your thumbs and lift them high, Then give your other fingers a try!

for

for

for

for

for

and

was

better

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

sun

needs

He

light

and

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Hover your hands over something flat, Little fingers first go tap, tap, tap.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.