Write Lesson 13
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Diary?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
nodded
Subject
my father
Sentence
My father nodded.
Add Detail: commas for clarity
With fear in his eyes, guards holding him against the wall,
my father nodded reassurance to me.
Re-read
Build
Use the commas to separate the clauses.
Check
With fear in his eyes guards holding him against the wall
___________________________________________________________________________
my father nodded reassurance to me.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
catch
Subject
Sentence
I catch Dad.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
I catch Dad whispering, “We’ll find a way to get out of here, won’t we?”
________________________________________________________________________________
I hear Father murmuring, “Surely we will seek out a form of escape.”
_____________________________________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
I catch Dad whispering, “We’ll find a way to get out of here, won’t we?”
________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
I hear Father murmuring, “Surely we will seek out a form of escape.”
_____________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Diary?
My turn to write Part 4
plan
writer's voice
Sentence Checker
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Reread
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Diary?
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Feedback: Who did what well?
I catch Dad whispering, “We’ll find a way to get out of here, won’t we?”
________________________________________________________________________________
INFORMAL
I hear Father murmuring, “Surely we will seek out a form of escape.”
_____________________________________________________________________________
FORMAL
With fear in his eyes, guards holding him against the wall,
my father nodded reassurance to me.
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Write Lesson 13
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Diary?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
nodded
Subject
my father
Sentence
My father nodded.
Add Detail: commas for clarity
With fear in his eyes, guards holding him against the wall,
my father nodded reassurance to me.
Re-read
Build
Use the commas to separate the clauses.
Check
With fear in his eyes guards holding him against the wall
___________________________________________________________________________
my father nodded reassurance to me.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
catch
Subject
Sentence
I catch Dad.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
I catch Dad whispering, “We’ll find a way to get out of here, won’t we?”
________________________________________________________________________________
I hear Father murmuring, “Surely we will seek out a form of escape.”
_____________________________________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
I catch Dad whispering, “We’ll find a way to get out of here, won’t we?”
________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
I hear Father murmuring, “Surely we will seek out a form of escape.”
_____________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Diary?
My turn to write Part 4
plan
writer's voice
Sentence Checker
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Reread
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Diary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
I catch Dad whispering, “We’ll find a way to get out of here, won’t we?”
________________________________________________________________________________
INFORMAL
I hear Father murmuring, “Surely we will seek out a form of escape.”
_____________________________________________________________________________
FORMAL
With fear in his eyes, guards holding him against the wall,
my father nodded reassurance to me.