Y6A One Day WO1 Write L12

Write Lesson 12

Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Diary?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

punished

Who/What

the Nazis

Sentence

The Nazis punished us.

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, without a hint of mercy,

____________________________________

The Nazis

punished us brutally.

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punished us brutally.

, without a hint of mercy,

____________________________________

Check

The Nazis

___________________________________________________________________________

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Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Diary?

My turn to write Part 3

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Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Diary?

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, without a hint of mercy,

____________________________________

The Nazis

punished us brutally.