Y6A One Day WO1 Write L11

Write Lesson 11

Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Diary?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

were given

Who/What

our names

Sentence

Our names were given.

Add Detail: cohesive devices

afterwards.

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Our names were given and the Nazis interrogated us

Re-read

Build

afterwards.

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Check

Our names were given and the Nazis interrogated us

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Diary?

My turn to write Part 2

plan

writer's voice

Sentence Checker

Working Wall

Watch me use my...

Your turn to write

Use the Sentence Checker

Use the Working Wall

Use your plan

Say before you write

Edit

Add

Reread

Share, Edit, Review

Effect

Feel

Edit

Imagine

Sentence Choice

Word Choice

Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Diary?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

afterwards.

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Our names were given and the Nazis interrogated us