Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write an illustration description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smiles
Who/What
illustrator
Sentence
The illustrator smiles.
Add Detail: relative clauses
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________
Re-read
Build
The illustrator
smiles.
, who recognises the scene,
______________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
reveals
Subject
he
Sentence
He reveals the mystery.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write an illustration description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
We’re not going to Pitchipoï.
I was just skin and bone.
Remember the disappearance of Harris Burdick and how he has contacted the investigating team to share his stories.
Remember the disappearance of Harris Burdick and how he has contacted the investigating team to share his stories.
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
What is around them?
How might they say it?
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
How might they react?
How will their body move?
My turn to write an illustration description.
Your turn to write an illustration description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write an illustration description?
CEW
Handwriting
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Feedback: Who did what well?
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________
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Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write an illustration description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smiles
Who/What
illustrator
Sentence
The illustrator smiles.
Add Detail: relative clauses
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________
Re-read
Build
The illustrator
smiles.
, who recognises the scene,
______________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
reveals
Subject
he
Sentence
He reveals the mystery.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write an illustration description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
We’re not going to Pitchipoï. I was just skin and bone.
Remember the disappearance of Harris Burdick and how he has contacted the investigating team to share his stories.
Remember the disappearance of Harris Burdick and how he has contacted the investigating team to share his stories.
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
What is around them?
How might they say it?
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
How might they react?
How will their body move?
My turn to write an illustration description.
Your turn to write an illustration description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write an illustration description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________