Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a personification poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
clutch
Who/What
Sentence
I clutch.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the rough sleeve of Father's torn winter coat.
_________________________________________________________________
I clutch
Re-read
Build
the rough sleeve of Father's torn winter coat.
_________________________________________________________________
Check
I clutch
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
thrummed
Subject
the yard
Sentence
The yard thrummed.
Add Detail: synonyms and antonyms
while I sat silently.
______
The noisy yard thrummed loudly
_____
____
Re-read
Build
Drag the synonyms and antonyms into the sentence.
Word bank
silently
_______
loudly
______
Check
quietly
_______
noisy
_____
while I sat .
______
The yard thrummed
_____
____
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a personification poem?
New words in our book
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murmuring
murmuring
murmuring
murmuring
Click for definitions!
churns
murmuring
barged
brutal
malicious
scarce
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murmuring
murmuring
murmuring
Book Time
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
Let's look at the front cover and title of 'One Day'. Let me read up to 'We were going on a journey...something about it'.
How?
When?
Using Personification
Illustration: the crowds of Jewish people inside the cattle truck on the train
tower
Concrete Nouns
Who might have sent you this letter?
of loneliness
wooden walls
My turn to write an illustration description.
Your turn to write an illustration description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Vehicle Text?
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Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
makes someone very curious
Act it out?
Words that are similar?
Words that are opposite?
Say it?
Draw it?
Spell it?
Say it in a sentence?
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
Act it out?
Words that are similar?
Words that are opposite?
Say it?
Draw it?
Spell it?
Say it in a sentence?
while I sat silently.
______
The noisy yard thrummed loudly
_____
____
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
Act it out?
Words that are similar?
Words that are opposite?
Say it?
Draw it?
Spell it?
Say it in a sentence?
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
the rough sleeve of Father's torn winter coat.
_________________________________________________________________
I clutch
makes someone very curious
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a personification poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
clutch
Who/What
Sentence
I clutch.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the rough sleeve of Father's torn winter coat.
_________________________________________________________________
I clutch
Re-read
Build
the rough sleeve of Father's torn winter coat.
_________________________________________________________________
Check
I clutch
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
thrummed
Subject
the yard
Sentence
The yard thrummed.
Add Detail: synonyms and antonyms
while I sat silently.
______
The noisy yard thrummed loudly
_____
____
Re-read
Build
Drag the synonyms and antonyms into the sentence.
Word bank
silently
_______
loudly
______
Check
quietly
_______
noisy
_____
while I sat .
______
The yard thrummed
_____
____
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a personification poem?
New words in our book
Click for definitions!
murmuring
murmuring
murmuring
murmuring
Click for definitions!
churns
murmuring
barged
brutal
malicious
scarce
Click for definitions!
murmuring
murmuring
murmuring
Book Time
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
Let's look at the front cover and title of 'One Day'. Let me read up to 'We were going on a journey...something about it'.
How?
When?
Using Personification
Illustration: the crowds of Jewish people inside the cattle truck on the train
tower
Concrete Nouns
Who might have sent you this letter?
of loneliness
wooden walls
My turn to write an illustration description.
Your turn to write an illustration description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Vehicle Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
makes someone very curious
Act it out? Words that are similar? Words that are opposite? Say it? Draw it? Spell it? Say it in a sentence?
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
Act it out? Words that are similar? Words that are opposite? Say it? Draw it? Spell it? Say it in a sentence?
while I sat silently.
______
The noisy yard thrummed loudly
_____
____
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
Act it out? Words that are similar? Words that are opposite? Say it? Draw it? Spell it? Say it in a sentence?
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
makes someone very curious
the rough sleeve of Father's torn winter coat.
_________________________________________________________________
I clutch
makes someone very curious