Y5A Curiosity WO2 Plan L8

Plan Lesson 8

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Formal Mission Log?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

analysed

Who/What

Sentence

I analysed rocks.

Add Detail: relative clauses

I analysed rocks

whose surfaces appeared cracked.

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whose surfaces appeared cracked.

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I analysed rocks

Check

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

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Combine?

Fix?

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Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

surveyed

Subject

Sentence

I surveyed the landscape.

Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses

I surveyed the landscape; there was still much left to explore.

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Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.

Check

I surveyed the landscape there was still much left to explore.

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Formal Mission Log?

How Formal Mission Logs Work

First: Report the landing and arrival, describe the surface and conditions, and explain any immediate observations or problems.

Then:Describe the landing site, explain the tasks completed and discoveries made, and report how the equipment performed.

Finally:Explain future plans, suggest improvements, and describe what preparations will happen next for the mission.

Let me show you how to plan.

Teacher's Plan: Mission Log: The Surface of Titan

Example Text: Mission Log: The Surface of the Moon

Your Plan: Mission Log: The Surface of Mars

Part 1: Report on landing and arrival on the surface

Part 2: Report on the landing site and its features

What good writing looks like

This will show you how to plan and write

Part 3: Describe tasks carried out

Part 4: Report on equipment and suggest improvements

Part 5: Describe preparations for next tasks

My Turn: Part 1

Your Turn: Part 1

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 2

Your Turn: Part 2

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

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My Turn: Part 3

Your Turn: Part 3

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

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My Turn: Part 4

Your Turn: Part 4

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

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My Turn: Part 5

Your Turn: Part 5

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

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My Completed Plan

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Can I plan my Formal Mission Log?

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Feedback: Who did what well?

I analysed rocks

whose surfaces appeared cracked.

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I surveyed the landscape; there was still much left to explore.

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