Y5A Curiosity WO2 Analyse L7

Analyse Lesson 7

Can I write a report paragraph?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

collected

Who/What

Sentence

I collected rocks.

Add Detail: cohesive devices

then

______

began testing them.

I collected rocks

Re-read

Build

began testing them.

Check

I collected rocks

then

______

___________________________________________________________________________

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

collected

Subject

Sentence

I collected samples.

Add Detail: semi-colons in lists

dust with a consistency similar to soil;

I collected several samples:

and carefully extracted ice particles.

various pieces of rock

Re-read

Build

various pieces of rock

I collected several samples:

and carefully extracted ice particles.

Check

dust with a consistency similar to soil;

___________________________________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I write a report paragraph?

Vehicle Text Recap

Illustration 1: Scientists planning and designing Curiosity the rover

Illustration 2: Curiosity being built in the lab

What tasks did Curiosity have to undertake while exploring Mars? What equipment was used?

Illustration 3: Curiosity being shown and displayed

Illustration 4: Curiosity landing on Mars, showing each stage of the landing with a parachute

Illustration 5: Curiosity firing a laser and drilling into the rock

Drama: Rover Reporter

Tasks completed include...

The surface presents...

Equipment used consists of...

The landing site appears...

Improvements should include...

There is evidence of...

Resources:

• Technical Vocabulary
• Equipment and Tasks
• Formal Words and Phrases

Take turns to report back as Curiosity about what has been completed during the mission so far.

My turn to write a report paragraph.

Your turn to write a report paragraph.

Use your Sentence Checker

Can I write a report paragraph?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

then

______

began testing them.

I collected rocks

dust with a consistency similar to soil;

I collected several samples:

and carefully extracted ice particles.

various pieces of rock