Y5A Curiosity WO2 Analyse L5

Analyse Lesson 5

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

were stored

Who/What

the samples

Sentence

The samples were stored.

Add Detail: brackets for parenthesis

(containing a variety of rocks)

___________________________________________

were stored securely.

The samples

Re-read

Build

(containing a variety of rocks)

___________________________________________

were stored securely.

Check

The samples

___________________________________________________________________________

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

was delayed

Subject

the mission

Sentence

The mission was delayed.

Add Detail: colon for independent clauses

The mission was delayed: my progress became halted.

_________________________

______________________

Re-read

Build

Insert the colon between the two independent clauses, expanding the information given.

Check

The mission was delayed my progress became halted.

___________________________________________________________________________

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has

The Example Text has...

Title

Paragraph

Key information

Factual details

Passive voice

Text structure

Features

Mission Log: The Surface of the Moon

Report by: Neil Armstrong Mission: Apollo 11 Date: 20.07.1969 Landing and arrival At 20:17, I landed the lunar module successfully on the moon’s surface. The onboard computer performed effectively (despite alarms being raised due to systems destabilising). Shortly afterwards, communication with Mission Control was regained. All systems were then rechecked (with no faults detected) and confirmed to be working as expected. After this, I prepared to disembark from the spacecraft. This mission, which had long been awaited, could now proceed with confidence.

Key information

Factual details

Title

Paragraph

Passive voice

Click on Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Relative clauses

Modal verbs

Prefixes

Brackets for parenthesis

Let's work in:

Stations

Pairs

Groups

Memorize the positions

Let me show you

Prefixes

Try adding the prefixes to the verbs to see if they make new words.

Prefix

Verb

over-

un-

pack

start

de-

dis-

re-

judge

mis-

Reveal

Prefixes

Let's find and discuss

Landing and arrival At 20:17, I landed the lunar module successfully on the moon’s surface. The onboard computer performed effectively (despite alarms being raised due to systems destabilising). Shortly afterwards, communication with Mission Control was regained. All systems were then rechecked (with no faults detected) and confirmed to be working as expected. After this, I prepared to disembark from the spacecraft. This mission, which had long been awaited, could now proceed with confidence.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Prefixes

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Relative clauses

Modal verbs

Prefixes

Brackets for parenthesis

Relative Clauses

Let me show you

Add the relative clauses to the sentences to add more information.

, which was covered in dust,

The surface of Mars seemed red in colour.

, when carefully calibrated,

My computer system provided accurate data.

Relative Clauses

Let's find and discuss

Landing site overview The landing site (located in the Sea of Tranquillity) proved highly suitable for my exploration to begin. The surface, where I had touched down, seemed to be covered in fine, grey dust. There were small craters and scattered rocks, but nothing blocking my way. This area, which had been carefully selected before launch, supported a safe landing. In addition, the ground remained firm under my feet. Movement felt unusual, as the moon’s weaker gravity allowed for lighter, slower steps that felt more like a bounce across its surface.

Feel

Imagine

Replace?

Remove?

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Relative Clauses

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Relative clauses

Modal verbs

Prefixes

Brackets for parenthesis

Let me show you

Modal verbs

Let's order the modal verbs from most to least likely to happen.

could

might

will

must

ought to

Most likely

Least likely

I _________ discover signs of water beneath the surface.

Modal verbs

Let's find and discuss

Preparation for future tasks After completing the initial tasks, the samples I collected were secured inside the module. Further tests of the samples will be carried out once I have returned to Earth. Equipment was rechecked and the spacecraft, which must operate efficiently, was prepared. Fuel levels shall be monitored closely (especially as fuel alarms had been raised after the launch) during my return. The last stage of this historic mission is ready to begin.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Modal verbs

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Relative clauses

Modal verbs

Prefixes

Brackets for parenthesis

Brackets for parenthesis

Let me show you

Drag the extra information in the brackets to add the parenthesis to the sentence.

(with safety checks done)

The module was secure ____________________ and set for landing.

Brackets for parenthesis

Let's find and discuss

Tasks and sample collection Firstly, I began to collect samples of the surface dust. The soil, which was soft and powdery, was carefully gathered using special tools. Several intriguing rock samples (some I did not recognise at all) were also collected. Equipment was then deployed to record data (including cameras and scientific instruments). The photographs taken will provide valuable evidence for future exploration.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Brackets for parenthesis

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector

Team Competition

How will we answer our questions today?

Vote

ThumbsUp

ThinkPair Share

Bob Up

Odd One Out

Which of these does not contain a verb beginning with a prefix?

B remember

A destabilising

D misjudged

C disembark

True or False?

Relative clauses are used to add more information in a sentence.

False

True

Tick Me

Which of these show modal verbs? Tick two.

A The mission could now proceed.

B Data was then collected and sent.

C Alarms had been raised after launch.

Check

D Fuel levels shall be monitored closely.

Which One's Right?

Which shows brackets used correctly?

A The landing site located in the Sea of Tranquillity (proved suitable).

B (The landing site located in the Sea of Tranquillity) proved suitable.

C The landing site (located in the Sea of Tranquillity) proved suitable.

D The landing site located in (the Sea of Tranquillity) proved suitable.

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

Landing site overview The landing site (located in the Sea of Tranquillity) proved highly suitable for my exploration to begin. The surface, where I had touched down, seemed to be covered in fine, grey dust. There were small craters and scattered rocks, but nothing blocking my way. This area, which had been carefully selected before launch, supported a safe landing. In addition, the ground remained firm under my feet. Movement felt unusual, as the moon’s weaker gravity allowed for lighter, slower steps that felt more like a bounce across its surface.

Report by: Neil Armstrong Mission: Apollo 11 Date: 20.07.1969 Landing and arrival At 20:17, I landed the lunar module successfully on the moon’s surface. The onboard computer performed effectively (despite alarms being raised due to systems destabilising). Shortly afterwards, communication with Mission Control was regained. All systems were then rechecked (with no faults detected) and confirmed to be working as expected. After this, I prepared to disembark from the spacecraft. This mission, which had long been awaited, could now proceed with confidence.

unstart

overstart

destart

disstart

restart

misstart

Preparation for future tasks After completing the initial tasks, the samples I collected were secured inside the module. Further tests of the samples will be carried out once I have returned to Earth. Equipment was rechecked and the spacecraft, which must operate efficiently, was prepared. Fuel levels shall be monitored closely (especially as fuel alarms had been raised after the launch) during my return. The last stage of this historic mission is ready to begin.

Equipment performance The spacesuit, that had been designed for extreme conditions, performed reliably throughout. Temperature levels remained controlled and oxygen supply was kept steady. However, the gloves were stiff and restrictive, which made it difficult to move my fingers while collecting rocks. These gloves should be redesigned to ensure that tasks for future missions can be undertaken more easily.

Equipment performance The spacesuit, that had been designed for extreme conditions, performed reliably throughout. Temperature levels remained controlled and oxygen supply was kept steady. However, the gloves were stiff and restrictive, which made it difficult to move my fingers while collecting rocks. These gloves should be redesigned to ensure that tasks for future missions can be undertaken more easily.

Tasks and sample collection Firstly, I began to collect samples of the surface dust. The soil, which was soft and powdery, was carefully gathered using special tools. Several intriguing rock samples (some I did not recognise at all) were also collected. Equipment was then deployed to record data (including cameras and scientific instruments). The photographs taken will provide valuable evidence for future exploration.

Preparation for future tasks After completing the initial tasks, the samples I collected were secured inside the module. Further tests of the samples will be carried out once I have returned to Earth. Equipment was rechecked and the spacecraft, which must operate efficiently, was prepared. Fuel levels shall be monitored closely (especially as fuel alarms had been raised after the launch) during my return. The last stage of this historic mission is ready to begin.

Equipment performance The spacesuit, that had been designed for extreme conditions, performed reliably throughout. Temperature levels remained controlled and oxygen supply was kept steady. However, the gloves were stiff and restrictive, which made it difficult to move my fingers while collecting rocks. These gloves should be redesigned to ensure that tasks for future missions can be undertaken more easily.

Equipment performance The spacesuit, that had been designed for extreme conditions, performed reliably throughout. Temperature levels remained controlled and oxygen supply was kept steady. However, the gloves were stiff and restrictive, which made it difficult to move my fingers while collecting rocks. These gloves should be redesigned to ensure that tasks for future missions can be undertaken more easily.

Report by: Neil Armstrong Mission: Apollo 11 Date: 20.07.1969 Landing and arrival At 20:17, I landed the lunar module successfully on the moon’s surface. The onboard computer performed effectively (despite alarms being raised due to systems destabilising). Shortly afterwards, communication with Mission Control was regained. All systems were then rechecked (with no faults detected) and confirmed to be working as expected. After this, I prepared to disembark from the spacecraft. This mission, which had long been awaited, could now proceed with confidence.

Preparation for future tasks After completing the initial tasks, the samples I collected were secured inside the module. Further tests of the samples will be carried out once I have returned to Earth. Equipment was rechecked and the spacecraft, which must operate efficiently, was prepared. Fuel levels shall be monitored closely (especially as fuel alarms had been raised after the launch) during my return. The last stage of this historic mission is ready to begin.

Report by: Neil Armstrong Mission: Apollo 11 Date: 20.07.1969 Landing and arrival At 20:17, I landed the lunar module successfully on the moon’s surface. The onboard computer performed effectively (despite alarms being raised due to systems destabilising). Shortly afterwards, communication with Mission Control was regained. All systems were then rechecked (with no faults detected) and confirmed to be working as expected. After this, I prepared to disembark from the spacecraft. This mission, which had long been awaited, could now proceed with confidence.

The mission was delayed: my progress became halted.

_________________________

______________________

Tasks and sample collection Firstly, I began to collect samples of the surface dust. The soil, which was soft and powdery, was carefully gathered using special tools. Several intriguing rock samples (some I did not recognise at all) were also collected. Equipment was then deployed to record data (including cameras and scientific instruments). The photographs taken will provide valuable evidence for future exploration.

unjudge

overjudge

dejudge

disjudge

rejudge

misjudge

Tasks and sample collection Firstly, I began to collect samples of the surface dust. The soil, which was soft and powdery, was carefully gathered using special tools. Several intriguing rock samples (some I did not recognise at all) were also collected. Equipment was then deployed to record data (including cameras and scientific instruments). The photographs taken will provide valuable evidence for future exploration.

overpack

unpack

depack

dispack

repack

mispack

Landing site overview The landing site (located in the Sea of Tranquillity) proved highly suitable for my exploration to begin. The surface, where I had touched down, seemed to be covered in fine, grey dust. There were small craters and scattered rocks, but nothing blocking my way. This area, which had been carefully selected before launch, supported a safe landing. In addition, the ground remained firm under my feet. Movement felt unusual, as the moon’s weaker gravity allowed for lighter, slower steps that felt more like a bounce across its surface.

Landing site overview The landing site (located in the Sea of Tranquillity) proved highly suitable for my exploration to begin. The surface, where I had touched down, seemed to be covered in fine, grey dust. There were small craters and scattered rocks, but nothing blocking my way. This area, which had been carefully selected before launch, supported a safe landing. In addition, the ground remained firm under my feet. Movement felt unusual, as the moon’s weaker gravity allowed for lighter, slower steps that felt more like a bounce across its surface.

(containing a variety of rocks)

___________________________________________

were stored securely.

The samples