Write Lesson 12
Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Space Journey Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
began
Verb
Who/What
I began to slow down.
Sentence
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
Within Mars's atmosphere,
I began to slow down.
_____________________________________
Re-read
Build
I began to slow down.
Within Mars's atmosphere,
_____________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
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Your turn to write a sentence.
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Combine?
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
told
Subject
Sentence
I told them.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
____________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
____________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Space Journey Narrative?
My turn to write Part 3
plan
writer's voice
Sentence Checker
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
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Reread
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Effect
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Sentence Choice
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Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Space Journey Narrative?
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Feedback: Who did what well?
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
INFORMAL
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
____________
FORMAL
Within Mars's atmosphere,
I began to slow down.
_____________________________________
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Write Lesson 12
Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Space Journey Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
began
Verb
Who/What
I began to slow down.
Sentence
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
Within Mars's atmosphere,
I began to slow down.
_____________________________________
Re-read
Build
I began to slow down.
Within Mars's atmosphere,
_____________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
told
Subject
Sentence
I told them.
Add Detail: formal or informal speech
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
____________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
____________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Space Journey Narrative?
My turn to write Part 3
plan
writer's voice
Sentence Checker
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Reread
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 3 of my Space Journey Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
I told them, “It's all working as it should, isn't it?”
__________________________________________
INFORMAL
“The system is functioning correctly,” I reported.
________________________________________
____________
FORMAL
Within Mars's atmosphere,
I began to slow down.
_____________________________________