Y5A Curiosity WO1 Plan L9

Plan Lesson 9

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Space Journey Narrative?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

land

Who/What

Sentence

I land.

Add Detail: modal verbs

land successfully.

might

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Re-read

Build

Drag the modal verbs to alter how likely the event is to happen.

must

_______

could

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might

________

Check

land successfully.

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

detected

Subject

Sentence

I detected movement.

Add Detail: dashes for independent clauses

I detected movement - could this be a sign of life on Mars?

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Re-read

Build

Insert the dash to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.

Check

I detected movement could this be a sign of life on Mars?

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Space Journey Narrative?

How Space Journey Narratives Work

First: Introduce the mission, launch into space and describe the journey and any worries or problems along the way.

Then:Describe preparing to land, the dangers and fears, and the exciting moment of landing on the planet or moon.

Finally:Describe exploring the new place, making discoveries and thinking about what will happen next.

Let me show you how to plan.

Teacher's Plan: Journey to Titan

Example Text: Journey to the Moon

Your Plan: Journey to Mars

Part 1: Describe launch from Earth into space

Part 2: Describe journey through space and worries about landing

What good writing looks like

This will show you how to plan and write

Part 3: Describe fears and preparing to land

Part 4: Landing is successful and exploration begins

Part 5: Describe exploration and future tasks

My Turn: Part 1

Your Turn: Part 1

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 2

Your Turn: Part 2

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 3

Your Turn: Part 3

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 4

Your Turn: Part 4

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 5

Your Turn: Part 5

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Completed Plan

Click

Now talk through your plan

Can I plan my Space Journey Narrative?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

I detected movement - could this be a sign of life on Mars?

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___________________

might

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land successfully.