Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a first-person character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
scanned
Who/What
Sentence
I scanned the surface.
Add Detail: dashes for parenthesis
- all cameras ready -
________________________________
I scanned the surface
for signs of life.
Re-read
Build
- all cameras ready -
________________________________
for signs of life.
Check
I scanned the surface
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
shone
Subject
the stars
Sentence
The stars shone.
Add Detail: synonyms and antonyms
The bright stars shone against
_____
the inky, dark blanket of space.
____
____
Re-read
Build
Drag the synonyms and antonyms into the sentence.
Word bank
vivid
dark
____
____
Check
inky
____
bright
_____
The stars shone against
_____
the , blanket of space.
____
____
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a first-person character description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Who?
What?
Remember: the story is told in first person, as Curiosity, and you will be writing your own Space Journey Narrative in the same way.
Where?
Why?
Let's re-read the part where Curiosity lands on Mars and begins to explore the surface.
When?
How?
Hot Seating: Ask the character
What would you liketo ask Curiosity?
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Illustration 1: Curiosity landing on Mars, showing each stage of the landing with a parachute
Illustration 3: Curiosity drilling the surface of Mars
Illustration 2: Curiosity beginning to explore Mars
My turn to write a first-person character description.
Your turn to write a first-person character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a first-person character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The bright stars shone against
_____
the inky, dark blanket of space.
____
____
- all cameras ready -
________________________________
I scanned the surface
for signs of life.
Y5A Curiosity WO1 Immerse L4
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Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a first-person character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
scanned
Who/What
Sentence
I scanned the surface.
Add Detail: dashes for parenthesis
- all cameras ready -
________________________________
I scanned the surface
for signs of life.
Re-read
Build
- all cameras ready -
________________________________
for signs of life.
Check
I scanned the surface
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
shone
Subject
the stars
Sentence
The stars shone.
Add Detail: synonyms and antonyms
The bright stars shone against
_____
the inky, dark blanket of space.
____
____
Re-read
Build
Drag the synonyms and antonyms into the sentence.
Word bank
vivid
dark
____
____
Check
inky
____
bright
_____
The stars shone against
_____
the , blanket of space.
____
____
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a first-person character description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Who?
What?
Remember: the story is told in first person, as Curiosity, and you will be writing your own Space Journey Narrative in the same way.
Where?
Why?
Let's re-read the part where Curiosity lands on Mars and begins to explore the surface.
When?
How?
Hot Seating: Ask the character
What would you liketo ask Curiosity?
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Illustration 1: Curiosity landing on Mars, showing each stage of the landing with a parachute
Illustration 3: Curiosity drilling the surface of Mars
Illustration 2: Curiosity beginning to explore Mars
My turn to write a first-person character description.
Your turn to write a first-person character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a first-person character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The bright stars shone against
_____
the inky, dark blanket of space.
____
____
- all cameras ready -
________________________________
I scanned the surface
for signs of life.