Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a metaphor poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
travelled
Who/What
Sentence
I travelled.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
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Build
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Check
I travelled through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
crossed
Subject
Sentence
I crossed.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
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Build
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Check
I crossed
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
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Can I write a metaphor poem?
New words in our book
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intrigues
atmosphere
delayed
detached
slack
hurtling
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blast off
rough terrain
evidence of water
'Seven Minutes of Terror'
sky crane manoeuvre
burning curiosity
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plutonium
rover
heat shield
boosters
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Let's look at the title of Curiosity and read the whole text. Were your predicitons correct?
When?
How?
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 1:Close-up of Mars in space
What can you hear? Is it loud or quiet?
Illustration 2:Earth in space, looking over at Mars in the distance
What can you see around you?
How might you describe this place?
What would it feel like to touch?
What might it feel like to be there?
Is it calm or busy?
Illustration 3:The module in space getting closer to Mars
My turn to write a metaphor poem.
Your turn to write a metaphor poem.
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Can I write a metaphor poem?
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I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a metaphor poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
travelled
Who/What
Sentence
I travelled.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Re-read
Build
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________
Check
I travelled through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
crossed
Subject
Sentence
I crossed.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
Check
I crossed
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a metaphor poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
intrigues
atmosphere
delayed
detached
slack
hurtling
Hover for definitions!
blast off
rough terrain
evidence of water
'Seven Minutes of Terror'
sky crane manoeuvre
burning curiosity
Hover for definitions!
plutonium
rover
heat shield
boosters
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Let's look at the title of Curiosity and read the whole text. Were your predicitons correct?
When?
How?
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 1:Close-up of Mars in space
What can you hear? Is it loud or quiet?
Illustration 2:Earth in space, looking over at Mars in the distance
What can you see around you?
How might you describe this place?
What would it feel like to touch?
What might it feel like to be there?
Is it calm or busy?
Illustration 3:The module in space getting closer to Mars
My turn to write a metaphor poem.
Your turn to write a metaphor poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a metaphor poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
I crossed
the wide, expansive plains of the red planet beneath me.
___________________________________________________
I travelled through
the vast, empty darkness of space around me.
_________________________________________