Y4A Leon and the Place Between WO2 Plan L8

Plan Lesson 8

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Persuasive Magic Show Report?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

must enjoy

Who/What

You

Sentence

You must enjoy the performances.

Add Detail: adverbs

Enjoy the many wonderful performances

there.

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Re-read

Build

there.

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Enjoy the many wonderful performances

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

take

You

Who/What

Sentence

You take a breath.

Add Detail: fronted adverbials

Before you fly away on the carpet,

________________________________________________

take a deep breath.

Re-read

Build

take a deep breath.

Before you fly away on the carpet,

________________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Persuasive Magic Show Report?

Let me show you how to plan.

Example Text: Come to the Victorian Fairground

Teacher's Plan: Come to the Magic Show

Your Plan: Come to the Magic Show

Part 1: Brief introduction and why to visit

Part 2: Describe the first thing

What good writing looks like

This will show you how to plan and write

Part 3: Describe the second thing

Part 4: Describe the third thing

Part 5: Describe the final thing

Part 6: Final reason to come

My Turn: Part 1

Your Turn: Part 1

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 2

Your Turn: Part 2

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 3

Your Turn: Part 3

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 4

Your Turn: Part 4

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 5

Your Turn: Part 5

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 6

Your Turn: Part 6

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Completed Plan

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Can I plan my Persuasive Magic Show Report?

CEW

Handwriting

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Feedback: Who did what well?

Enjoy the many wonderful performances

there.

________

Before you fly away on the carpet,

________________________________________________

take a deep breath.