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Analyse Lesson 5

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

has been

Who/What

This show

Sentence

This show has been running.

Add Detail: present perfect tense

running for years.

has been

____________

This magic show

Re-read

Build

Re-read

Build

running for years.

has been

____________

This magic show

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

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Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has

The Example Text has...

Paragraphs

Heading

Direct address

Effective phrases

Exciting words and phrases

Features

Text structure

Come to the Victorian Fairground

Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

Exciting words and phrases

Effective phrases

Heading

Paragraphs

Direct address

Click on / Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Topic sentences

Alliteration

Present perfect tense

Questions

Let's work in:

Stations
Pairs
Groups

Present perfect tense

Let me show you

have been

has attracted

have dazzled

everyone.

The performers

to the magic show.

many visitors.

Our magic show

Reveal

Present perfect tense

Let's find and discuss

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Present perfect tense

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Topic sentences

Alliteration

Present perfect tense

Questions

Alliteration

Let me show you

Drag the word to complete the alliterative phrase.

ride

music

somersaults

revolving

send your stomach into

__________

__________

movement, magical colours and

Reveal

__________

Alliteration

Let's find and discuss

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Alliteration

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Topic sentences

Alliteration

Present perfect tense

Questions

Let me show you

Reveal

Topic sentences

Match the topic sentence to the ride it describes.

The Ferris Wheel

...a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses.

...a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars.

Swinging Steam Yacht

The Merry-Go-Round

...a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse.

The Helter Skelter

...a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth.

Topic sentences

Let's find and discuss

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Topic sentences

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Topic sentences

Alliteration

Present perfect tense

Questions

Questions

Let me show you

Let's discuss how these questions keep the reader interested.

Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before?

Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there?

Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

Questions

Let's find and discuss

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Questions

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up

Odd One Out

Which one does not include present perfect tense?

A It has been a favourite for years.

B Visitors have been amazed.

D The magic has been waiting for you.

C You have to see the fair.

Picture Me

Reveal Text

Which image best shows this phrase using alliteration? 'send your stomach into somersaults'

Tick Me

Tick two that desceibe what topic sentences are used for.

A persuading the reader

B beginning paragraphs

C explaining what the feature is

Check

D keeping the reader interested

True or False?

Questions can be used to make the reader think.

True
False

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

everyone.

The performers

have dazzled

to the magic show.

have been

many visitors.

Our magic show

has attracted

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

B beginning paragraphs

C explaining what the feature is

running for years.

has been

____________

This magic show

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

revolving

send your stomach into

ride

__________

somersaults

__________

movement, magical colours and

music

__________

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?