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Analyse Lesson 4

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

will be

Who/What

The experience

Sentence

The experience will be magical.

Add Detail: adverbs

The experience will

then

______

become even more magical.

Re-read

Build

become even more magical.

then

______

The experience will

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

explore

You

Who/What

Sentence

You can explore.

Add Detail: fronted adverbials

After climbing through the door,

you can explore.

_____________________________________________

Re-read

Build

you can explore.

After climbing through the door,

_____________________________________________

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has

The Example Text has...

Paragraphs

Heading

Direct address

Effective phrases

Exciting words and phrases

Features

Text structure

Come to the Victorian Fairground

Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

Exciting words and phrases

Effective phrases

Heading

Paragraphs

Direct address

Click on / Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Alternative nouns

Prepositions

is or are?

Fronted adverbials

Let's work in:

Stations
Pairs
Groups

Let me show you

is or are?

is

are

is

are

Magic tricks

a part of the show.

Rides like this

designed to excite.

The Ferris Wheel

a giant!

Abdul Kazam

the most talented magician.

Reveal

is or are?

Let's find and discuss

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

is or are?

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Alternative nouns

Prepositions

is or are?

Fronted adverbials

Let me show you

Prepositions

Drag the preposition to complete the prepositional phrase.

at

of

to

the very top the world.

_____

_____

list of wonders the Victorian funfair.

spirl staircase a dizzying height.

_____

Reveal

Prepositions

Let's find and discuss

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Prepositions

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Alternative nouns

Prepositions

is or are?

Fronted adverbials

Let me show you

Alternative nouns

Explore the alternative nouns to avoid repeating the same noun.

This wonderland is a wonderland of enchantment.

paradise

whole world

magical realm

The jugglers are the best jugglers you will ever see.

performers

artists

entertainers

Alternative nouns

Let's find and discuss

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Alternative nouns

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Alternative nouns

Prepositions

is or are?

Fronted adverbials

Fronted adverbials

Let me show you

Let's place a comma after each fronted adverbial.

When you get there you can watch all the wonderful sights.

Then jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down.

Securely in your seat let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up.

Reveal

Fronted adverbials

Let's find and discuss

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Fronted adverbials

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up

Yes or No?

Do these use 'is' or 'are' correctly?

Yes
No

A It is one of the best attractions.

Yes

B There are many places to explore.

No
Yes

C Fairgrounds is full of fantastic fun.

No

D Rides like this are very popular.

Yes
No

Picture Me

Reveal Text

Which image best shows this expanded noun phrase? 'the comfort of your very own dangling capsule'

True or False?

Different nouns can help to avoid repetiton and keep the reader interested.

False
True

Which One's Right?

Which one is a fronted adverbial to show time?

B Without a doubt,

A Securely in your seat,

C When you get there,

D At the fairground,

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

are

Magic tricks

a part of the show.

are

Rides like this

designed to excite.

The Ferris Wheel

a giant!

is

is

Abdul Kazam

the most talented magician.

After climbing through the door,

you can explore.

_____________________________________________

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

The experience will

then

______

become even more magical.

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights.

Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down.

Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up.

at

of

the very top the world.

_____

_____

list of wonders the Victorian funfair.

to

spirl staircase a dizzying height.

_____

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

The Merry-Go-Round The Merry-Go-Round is a rotating spinning spectacle of galloping horses and is definitely one on the list of wonders at the Victorian funfair. Step onto the platform circle, climb onto one of the gilded horses, then spiral in delight as the horse dances up and down. This rotating carousel brings movement, magical colours and music all together. It is a particularly popular ride.

The Helter Skelter The Helter Skelter is a large slide that looks like a towering lighthouse wrapped in red and white stripes. It has been a firm fairground favourite for many years. Climb its spiral staircase to a dizzying height. Then, jump onto a mat and slide all the way back down in a swirl. Do not forget to hold on tight as its steep slide causes you to zoom down at an alarming speed! This is not one for the faint-hearted. What a fantastic feature of the fairground!

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!

Swinging Steam Yacht The Swinging Steam Yacht is a vessel powered by steam which it uses to move back and forth. Securely in your seat, let the swinging and swaying boat sweep you up, up and away. Sail into the air before plunging back down again. This swooping boat reaches a dizzy height of sixty feet, giving you a thrilling sense of weightlessness. Visitors have been amazed by how high up it soars. This ride will send your stomach into somersaults! Fairground rides like this are designed to excite you, and this is certainly no exception!

From fun on the Ferris Wheel to swinging on the Steam Yacht, there really is plenty to experience at the Victorian fairground. The magic has been waiting for you! Which ride will you choose to start your funfair adventure?

The Ferris Wheel The Ferris Wheel is a giant revolving wheel with passenger cars suspended from it in the air. Without a doubt, this revolving ride is the perfect way to catch a bird’s-eye view of the entire fairground. The famous Ferris Wheel transports you up to the very top of the world! When you get there, you can watch all the wonderful sights from the comfort of your very own dangling capsule! It really is one of the best attractions to start off your day.

Come to the Victorian Fairground Roll up, roll up! Have you ever experienced the fantastic fun of a fairground before? Do you know about all the amazing excitement to be had there? Read on to discover the marvellous Victorian fair. Miss it and miss out!