Y5F Wilma Rudolph Write L11

Write Lesson 11

Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Gratitude Speech?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

thank

Who/What

Sentence

I thank my teammates.

Add Detail: commas for clarity

I would like to thank my teammates, trainers, coaches and friends.

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Build

Use the commas to separate the clauses.

Check

I would like to thank my teammates trainers coaches and friends.

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Your turn to write a sentence.

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Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

express

Subject

Sentence

I express gratitude.

Add Detail: formal or informal vocabulary

I express my sincere gratitude for all your unwavering support.

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Build

Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.

FORMAL

Check

INFORMAL

I just want to say thanks for all the help you've given me.

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I express my sincere gratitude for all your unwavering support.

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Gratitude Speech?

My turn to write Part 2

plan

writer's voice

Sentence Checker

Working Wall

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Your turn to write

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Use your plan

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Effect

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Sentence Choice

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Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Gratitude Speech?

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I would like to thank my teammates, trainers, coaches and friends.

I just want to say thanks for all the help you've given me.

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INFORMAL

FORMAL

I express my sincere gratitude for all your unwavering support.

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