Y5F Wilma Rudolph Plan L9

Plan Lesson 9

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Gratitude Speech?

Handwriting

Handwriting

palm crouch

thumb push

finger tap

finger lift

R E A D Y

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chap

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My Turn

Your Turn

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

overpowers

Who/What

doubt

Sentence

Doubt overpowers me.

Add Detail: verb prefixes

overpower

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me.

I did not let my doubt

Re-read

Build

overpower

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me.

Check

I did not let my doubt

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

owe

Subject

Sentence

I owe you.

Add Detail: dashes for independent clauses

I must share my gratitude - I owe my success to you.

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Re-read

Build

Insert the dash to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.

Check

I must share my gratitude I owe my success to you.

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Gratitude Speech?

How Gratitude Speeches Work

First: Introduce yourself and explain your journey and challenges.

Then:Share your thoughts, feelings, and what helped you along the way.

Finally:Celebrate your success and thank the people who supported you.

Let me show you how to plan.

Teacher's Plan: A Gratitude Speech by Joan Benoit Samuelson

Example Text: A Gratitude Speech by Alice Coachman

Your Plan: A Gratitude Speech by Wilma Rudolph

Part 1: Introduce self and purpose of speech

Part 2: Share the dream, describing talent and ambition

What good writing looks like

This will show you how to plan and write

Part 3: Describe adversity faced and help received

Part 4: Describe fears and doubts

Part 5: Share successes and give thanks

My Turn: Part 1

Your Turn: Part 1

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 2

Your Turn: Part 2

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 3

Your Turn: Part 3

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 4

Your Turn: Part 4

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 5

Your Turn: Part 5

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Completed Plan

Click

Now talk through your plan

Can I plan my Gratitude Speech?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.

I must share my gratitude - I owe my success to you.

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Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

overpower

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me.

I did not let my doubt

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.