Y5F Wilma Rudolph Immerse L4

Immerse Lesson 4

Can I write an inner voice paragraph?

Handwriting

Handwriting

palm crouch

thumb push

finger tap

finger lift

R E A D Y

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chap

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My Turn

Your Turn

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

darted

Who/What

Sentence

I darted.

Add Detail: expanded noun phrase

the dusty, dirty streets of my hometown in Tennessee.

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I darted across

Re-read

Build

the dusty, dirty streets of my hometown in Tennessee.

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Check

I darted across

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

is

Subject

this

Sentence

This is a significant moment.

Add Detail: expanded noun phrase

a significant and powerful moment of gratitude for me.

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This is

Re-read

Build

a significant and powerful moment of gratitude for me.

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Check

This is

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My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I write an inner voice paragraph?

Illustration 1: Wilma's family helping to massage and heal her leg

Role on the Wall

Illustration 2: Wilma running once her leg brace is off

Think

Say

Do

Illustration 3: Wilma coming third in the Olympic 400-metre relay race

Feel

Then bring the character to life!

First

Describe

Behave

My turn to write an inner voice paragraph.

Your turn to write an inner voice paragraph.

Use your Sentence Checker

Can I write an inner voice paragraph?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

a significant and powerful moment of gratitude for me.

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This is

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

the dusty, dirty streets of my hometown in Tennessee.

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I darted across

Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.

Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.