Write Lesson 11
Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Portal Narrative?
Handwriting
Handwriting
thumb push
palm crouch
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
he
Sentence
He was amazed.
Add Detail: adverbs
He was amazed at all he had found
there.
_______
Re-read
Build
He was amazed at all he had found
there.
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
appeared
Abdul Kazam
Who/What
Sentence
Abdul Kazam appeared.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
With a cloud of purple smoke,
Abdul Kazam appeared.
__________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Abdul Kazam appeared.
With a cloud of purple smoke,
__________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Portal Narrative?
My turn to write Part 2
plan
Sentence Checker
writer's voice
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Re-read
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Portal Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
With a cloud of purple smoke,
Abdul Kazam appeared.
__________________________________________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Start with your thumbs and lift them high, Then give your other fingers a try!
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Hover your hands over something flat, Little fingers first go tap, tap, tap.
Put your hands in a crouch then your fingertips down. Keep your palms up high and crouch to the ground.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
there.
He was amazed at all he had found
_______
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
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Write Lesson 11
Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Portal Narrative?
Handwriting
Handwriting
thumb push
palm crouch
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
he
Sentence
He was amazed.
Add Detail: adverbs
He was amazed at all he had found
there.
_______
Re-read
Build
He was amazed at all he had found
there.
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
appeared
Abdul Kazam
Who/What
Sentence
Abdul Kazam appeared.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
With a cloud of purple smoke,
Abdul Kazam appeared.
__________________________________________
Re-read
Build
Abdul Kazam appeared.
With a cloud of purple smoke,
__________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Portal Narrative?
My turn to write Part 2
plan
Sentence Checker
writer's voice
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Re-read
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 2 of my Portal Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
With a cloud of purple smoke,
Abdul Kazam appeared.
__________________________________________
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Start with your thumbs and lift them high, Then give your other fingers a try!
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Hover your hands over something flat, Little fingers first go tap, tap, tap.
Put your hands in a crouch then your fingertips down. Keep your palms up high and crouch to the ground.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
there.
He was amazed at all he had found
_______
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.