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Analyse Lesson 6

Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

explained

Who/What

boy

Sentence

The boy explained.

Add Detail: inverted commas

"This is the place between,"

the boy explained.

Re-read

Build

"This is the place between,"

the boy explained.

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

called

Who/What

Abdul Kazam

Sentence

Abdul Kazam called.

Add Detail: speech punctuation

Abdul Kazam called.

"Come back to us,"

Re-read

Build

Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.

Come back to us

Abdul Kazam called

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.

The Example Text has...

Paragraphs

Title

Words and phrases to describe

Third person

Magical verbs

Features

Text structure

Behind the Magic Curtain

Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.

Paragraph

Third person

Magical verbs

Title

Words and phrases to describe

Click on / Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for sounds

Fronted adverbials

Speech punctuation

Short sentences

Let's work in:

Stations
Pairs
Groups

Fronted adverbials

Let me show you

Let's place a comma after each fronted adverbial.

Trembling with giddiness he waited for the show to start.

High above the circus tent the stars sparkled.

When it all went dark the audience fizzed in anticipation.

Reveal

Fronted adverbials

Let's find and discuss

Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Fronted adverbials

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for sounds

Fronted adverbials

Speech punctuation

Short sentences

Speech punctuation

Let me show you

Let's add the missing speech punctuation.

What is this place the little boy asked.

The magician called out Who will join me on the stage

Leon! Come back to us the loud voice boomed.

Reveal

Speech punctuation

Let's find and discuss

The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Reveal

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Speech punctuation

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for sounds

Fronted adverbials

Speech punctuation

Short sentences

Words and phrases for sounds

Let me show you

Let's discuss the sounds that come to your mind when you read these words or phrases.

crashed

puff of smoke

clattering

roared with applause

Words and phrases for sounds

Let's find and discuss

As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Words and phrases for sounds

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases for sounds

Fronted adverbials

Speech punctuation

Short sentences

Short sentences

Let me show you

Let's discuss how these short sentences create excitement.

It was time.

Everyone gasped.

Then, silence.

Short sentences

Let's find and discuss

Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Short sentences

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up

Tick Me

Tick the fronted adverbials that show manner (how something is done).

Tick two

A High above him,

B Trembling with giddiness,

C As far as Kaspar could see,

Check

D With a puff of smoke,

Which One's Right?

Which one shows speech punctuation used correctly?

A It's about to start, "someone said softly."

B "It's about to start, someone said softly."

C "It's about to start," someone said softly.

D "It's about to start", someone said softly.

Picture Me

Which image best shows this phrase?fizzed in anticipation

True or False?

Using short sentences doesn't help to create excitement.

False
True

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

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Feedback: Who did what well?

Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.

Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.

The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…

"What is this place?" the little boy asked.

The magician called out, "Who will join me on the stage?"

"Leon! Come back to us!" the loud voice boomed.

As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.

"This is the place between,"

the boy explained.

Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.

Trembling with giddiness, he waited for the show to start.

High above the circus tent, the stars sparkled.

When it all went dark, the audience fizzed in anticipation.

Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.

The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…

Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.

B Trembling with giddiness,

D With a puff of smoke,

As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.

The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…

Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.

"Come back to us,"

Abdul Kazam called.

As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.

Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.

Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.

Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.

Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.