Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
took off
Who/What
carpet
Sentence
The carpet took off.
Add Detail: adverbs
soon
The magic carpet
took off.
_______
Re-read
Build
The magic carpet
soon
_______
took off.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
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Your turn to write a sentence.
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
gathered
everyone
Who/What
Sentence
Everyone gathered.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
At sunset,
everyone gathered.
______________
Re-read
Build
At sunset,
______________
everyone gathered.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
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Title
Words and phrases to describe
Third person
Magical verbs
Features
Text structure
Behind the Magic Curtain
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
Paragraph
Third person
Magical verbs
Title
Words and phrases to describe
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Let me show you
was or were?
were
was
were
was
The magic show
full of entertainment.
The spectators
amazed by the jugglers.
There
no seats left.
The little boy
absolutely enthralled.
Reveal
was or were?
Let's find and discuss
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
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Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
was or were?
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Let me show you
Prepositions
Drag the preposition to complete the expanded noun phrase.
inside
behind
over
the small, excited boy
the tent
the marvellous magician
the curtain
________
________
bright, golden light
the stage
Reveal
________
Prepositions
Let's find and discuss
Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
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Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Pronouns
Let me show you
Complete each sentence with a pronoun to avoid repeating the noun.
they
he
his
Leon was captivated as __________ watched the magic unfold.
The magician was grinning with __________ mysterious smile.
The audience were silent as __________ watched the show.
Reveal
Pronouns
Let's find and discuss
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Pronouns
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Alternative nouns
Let me show you
Explore the alternative nouns to avoid repeating the same noun.
The magician saw Leon and knew he has to choose Leon.
the child
the boy
the young lad
Abdul Kazam appeared and Abdul Kazam spoke to the audience.
the illusionist
the magician
the conjurer
Alternative nouns
Let's find and discuss
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Alternative nouns
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
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Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
Which one is not showing 'was' or 'were' used correctly?
B he was
A no-one were
C people were
D the show was
Picture Me
Which image best shows this expanded noun phrase?the world of magic behind the curtain
Yes or No?
Are these pronouns that can be used to avoid repeating 'Abdul Kazam'?
A they
Yes
No
No
B her
Yes
Yes
C he
No
Yes
D himself
No
True or False?
Different nouns can be used to avoid repeating the same noun, helping sentences to flow.
True
False
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
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Feedback: Who did what well?
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
soon
The magic carpet
took off.
_______
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped.
The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped.
The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped.
The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
he
his
they
the small, excited boy
the tent
the marvellous magician
the curtain
inside
behind
________
________
bright, golden light
the stage
over
________
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
At sunset,
everyone gathered.
______________
Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
The magic show
was
full of entertainment.
The spectators
were
amazed by the jugglers.
There
were
no seats left.
was
The little boy
absolutely enthralled.
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Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
took off
Who/What
carpet
Sentence
The carpet took off.
Add Detail: adverbs
soon
The magic carpet
took off.
_______
Re-read
Build
The magic carpet
soon
_______
took off.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
gathered
everyone
Who/What
Sentence
Everyone gathered.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
At sunset,
everyone gathered.
______________
Re-read
Build
At sunset,
______________
everyone gathered.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer's Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Words and phrases to describe
Third person
Magical verbs
Features
Text structure
Behind the Magic Curtain
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
Paragraph
Third person
Magical verbs
Title
Words and phrases to describe
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Let me show you
was or were?
were
was
were
was
The magic show
full of entertainment.
The spectators
amazed by the jugglers.
There
no seats left.
The little boy
absolutely enthralled.
Reveal
was or were?
Let's find and discuss
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
was or were?
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Let me show you
Prepositions
Drag the preposition to complete the expanded noun phrase.
inside
behind
over
the small, excited boy
the tent
the marvellous magician
the curtain
________
________
bright, golden light
the stage
Reveal
________
Prepositions
Let's find and discuss
Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Pronouns
Let me show you
Complete each sentence with a pronoun to avoid repeating the noun.
they
he
his
Leon was captivated as __________ watched the magic unfold.
The magician was grinning with __________ mysterious smile.
The audience were silent as __________ watched the show.
Reveal
Pronouns
Let's find and discuss
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Pronouns
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Pronouns
was or were?
Prepositions
Alternative nouns
Alternative nouns
Let me show you
Explore the alternative nouns to avoid repeating the same noun.
The magician saw Leon and knew he has to choose Leon.
the child
the boy
the young lad
Abdul Kazam appeared and Abdul Kazam spoke to the audience.
the illusionist
the magician
the conjurer
Alternative nouns
Let's find and discuss
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Alternative nouns
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
Which one is not showing 'was' or 'were' used correctly?
B he was
A no-one were
C people were
D the show was
Picture Me
Which image best shows this expanded noun phrase?the world of magic behind the curtain
Yes or No?
Are these pronouns that can be used to avoid repeating 'Abdul Kazam'?
A they
Yes
No
No
B her
Yes
Yes
C he
No
Yes
D himself
No
True or False?
Different nouns can be used to avoid repeating the same noun, helping sentences to flow.
True
False
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
soon
The magic carpet
took off.
_______
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
The magician’s eyes gazed over his enthralled audience. “I now need a volunteer to disappear behind the magic curtain,” he announced. Without thinking, Kaspar stood up and darted to the stage. The illusionist pointed. “You… here comes a brave young man,” he called out as the audience clapped. The boy asked curiously, “What’s behind the curtain?” But the magician only smiled. He tapped the side of his nose and then beckoned the boy forwards. Taking a nervous step forward, Kaspar pulled the velvety material back and disappeared into the darkness. He immediately knew he was no longer in the theatre. He was somewhere very different. Kaspar was surrounded by a world of wonder that took his breath away…
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
he
his
they
the small, excited boy
the tent
the marvellous magician
the curtain
inside
behind
________
________
bright, golden light
the stage
over
________
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
At sunset,
everyone gathered.
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Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
Soon, a distant voice called, “Kaspar! Kaspar! Return to us!” Forcing himself to turn away, he began to withdraw from the world of magic behind the curtain. With a bang, boom and a puff of smoke, he found himself returned to the stage in front of those very curtains. The audience roared with applause and the conjurer took a deep bow. The curtains were pulled open and there was nothing but darkness. However, when Kaspar put his hand into his pocket, he found a handful of tiny, purple gemstones. “Magic… it really does exist,” he whispered to himself.
As far as Kaspar could see, thousands of magical items were rearranging themselves on shelves. Spell books, handkerchiefs, wands and sparkling things whooshed through the air. It was like a never-ending library of enchantment. High above him, the shelves reached up into a starry night sky. Tiny gemstones rained down from purple clouds, clattering into top hats the size of bathtubs. All the little boy could do was stare in amazement. Ducking down, he narrowly avoided a swirl of books that crashed into a nearby shelf. He laughed and held his hands out as glitter showered over him. It was pure magic.
Nightfall had arrived and the golden lights of the grand theatre began to twinkle. It was time. The auditorium thrummed with excited whispers, but no-one was quite as excited as Kaspar. With wide, bright eyes, the young boy gazed at the enormous stage between two velvet curtains. Trembling with giddiness, he waited impatiently as the room fizzed in anticipation. Finally, the last few people were taking their seats. “It’s about to start,” someone said softly. Then, silence.
Suddenly, a spotlight shone a dazzling beam over the centre of the stage. A mysterious melody began to play like a delicate dance of magic. Kaspar held his breath. Then, with a swish and a puff of smoke, the magician appeared in front of the velvet curtain. He grinned a marvellous grin and Kaspar’s stomach flipped in excitement. In a deep, booming voice, he called, “I am Abdul Kazam and welcome to my magic show!” Fireworks sparked from his fingertips, shadows transformed into shapes and puffs of colourful smoke billowed into the air. Everyone gasped. The spectators were transfixed.
The magic show
was
full of entertainment.
The spectators
were
amazed by the jugglers.
There
were
no seats left.
was
The little boy
absolutely enthralled.