Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
show
Sentence
The show was magical.
Add Detail: word families
magical.
The show was
____________
Re-read
Build
The show was
magical.
____________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
gazed
Who/What
they
Sentence
They gazed.
Add Detail: noun phrase
the marvellous, golden tent before them.
They gazed at
_____________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
They gazed at
the marvellous, golden tent before them.
_____________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
How?
When?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read Leon and the Place Between up to ‘Bright white handkercheifs became fluttering doves’
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Leon and the Place Between. (without showing the final illustration)
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
magical.
The show was
____________
the marvellous, golden tent before them.
They gazed at
_____________________________________________________
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
show
Sentence
The show was magical.
Add Detail: word families
magical.
The show was
____________
Re-read
Build
The show was
magical.
____________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
gazed
Who/What
they
Sentence
They gazed.
Add Detail: noun phrase
the marvellous, golden tent before them.
They gazed at
_____________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
They gazed at
the marvellous, golden tent before them.
_____________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
How?
When?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read Leon and the Place Between up to ‘Bright white handkercheifs became fluttering doves’
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Leon and the Place Between. (without showing the final illustration)
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
magical.
The show was
____________
the marvellous, golden tent before them.
They gazed at
_____________________________________________________