Analyse Lesson 6
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were amazed
Who/What
People
Sentence
People were amazed.
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People were amazed at his
overachievement.
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People were amazed at his
overachievement.
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decided
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Usain
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Usain decided.
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Usain decided to run a race.
One morning,
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One morning,
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Usain decided to run a race.
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Farah's Footsteps: Find Out More About Mo Farah
Early Life
In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
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Past tense
Third person
Paragraph
Title
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Writer's Knowledge
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Noun phrases
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I never doubt myself Usain explained.
Believe in your dreams Usain Bolt said.
I run to inspire Mo says.
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Speech punctuation
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Legacy
Mo Farah is now an Olympic superstar who is known for his outstanding performance under pressure. He has grown into a hero for many. His victory celebration is called the ‘mobot’, an iconic dance that many of his fans have imitated! “I don’t just run to win. I run to inspire,” Mo says. Mo’s story has shown that by hard work and never giving up on dreams, triumph is achievable. Mo has also shown his humility and dedication to his sport. He created the Mo Farah Foundation which helps people affected by war and poverty in East Africa. He even received a knighthood from Queen Elizabeth II in 2017. Mo Farah is an inspiration around the world with his journey from humble beginnings to becoming a gold medal-winning Olympian!
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Imagine
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Speech punctuation
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Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Speech punctuation
Different verbs
Noun phrases
Noun phrases
Let me show you
Drag the adjectives to create a noun phrase.
his outstanding
gold medal-winning
energetic young
Olympian
boy
performance
Reveal
Noun phrases
Let's find and discuss
Early Life
In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
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Remove?
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Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Noun phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Speech punctuation
Different verbs
Noun phrases
Different verbs
Let me show you
Drag the verbs that would interest the reader into the circle below.
darted
energetic
believed
pursue
hero
champion
tough
Reveal
flourish
Different verbs
Let's find and discuss
Success
In 2012, Mo’s dreams finally became a reality at the London Olympics. He darted ahead and took an early lead in front of an ecstatic crowd. They chanted with every step as he left his competitors behind. He raced to victory in the 5,000m and the 10,000m too! He won the heart of the nation with all of these achievements. After this success, Mo continued to flourish by dominating races and breaking records. He repeated the same triumphs in the 2016 Olympics in Rio de Janeiro. Mo has truly become the most successful British track athlete in modern Olympic history!
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Which One's Right?
Which one shows speech marks being used correctly?
A I run to inspire, Mo says.
B I run to inspire, "Mo says."
C "I run to inspire, Mo says."
D "I run to inspire," Mo says.
Picture Me
Which image best shows this noun phrase?'a gold medal-winning Olympian'
Yes or No?
Do these phrases contain verbs to keep the reader interested?
A raced to victory
Yes
No
No
Yes
B a warm, playful smile
Yes
No
C dream of winning
Yes
D humility and dedication
No
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Early Life
In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
Legacy
Mo Farah is now an Olympic superstar who is known for his outstanding performance under pressure. He has grown into a hero for many. His victory celebration is called the ‘mobot’, an iconic dance that many of his fans have imitated! “I don’t just run to win. I run to inspire,” Mo says. Mo’s story has shown that by hard work and never giving up on dreams, triumph is achievable. Mo has also shown his humility and dedication to his sport. He created the Mo Farah Foundation which helps people affected by war and poverty in East Africa. He even received a knighthood from Queen Elizabeth II in 2017. Mo Farah is an inspiration around the world with his journey from humble beginnings to becoming a gold medal-winning Olympian!
Obstacles
Young Mo went to school in London but life was challenging. He didn’t speak English and had to adjust to a new culture. His natural talent for distance running was quickly noticed. Therefore, his teacher encouraged him to practise running faster every day. Young Mo was set on the right track and he had found his purpose. He began competing at a running club although things soon became tough. For example, he faced the bitter misfortune of not qualifying for the 2008 Olympic Games. However, he believed that one day he could achieve his goals. He always dreamed of being an Olympic champion so he pushed himself to the limit. “Don’t dream of winning, train for it,” Mo once famously said. He pushed past all disbelief and strived for excellence in every race.
pursue
believed
darted
flourish
Usain decided to run a race.
One morning,
__________________
"I never doubt myself," Usain explained.
"Believe in your dreams," Usain Bolt said.
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
"I run to inspire," Mo says.
Noun Phrases
gold medal-winning Olympian
energetic young boy
his outstanding performance
Obstacles
Young Mo went to school in London but life was challenging. He didn’t speak English and had to adjust to a new culture. His natural talent for distance running was quickly noticed. Therefore, his teacher encouraged him to practise running faster every day. Young Mo was set on the right track and he had found his purpose. He began competing at a running club although things soon became tough. For example, he faced the bitter misfortune of not qualifying for the 2008 Olympic Games. However, he believed that one day he could achieve his goals. He always dreamed of being an Olympic champion so he pushed himself to the limit. “Don’t dream of winning, train for it,” Mo once famously said. He pushed past all disbelief and strived for excellence in every race.
Obstacles
Young Mo went to school in London but life was challenging. He didn’t speak English and had to adjust to a new culture. His natural talent for distance running was quickly noticed. Therefore, his teacher encouraged him to practise running faster every day. Young Mo was set on the right track and he had found his purpose. He began competing at a running club although things soon became tough. For example, he faced the bitter misfortune of not qualifying for the 2008 Olympic Games. However, he believed that one day he could achieve his goals. He always dreamed of being an Olympic champion so he pushed himself to the limit. “Don’t dream of winning, train for it,” Mo once famously said. He pushed past all disbelief and strived for excellence in every race.
Success
In 2012, Mo’s dreams finally became a reality at the London Olympics. He darted ahead and took an early lead in front of an ecstatic crowd. They chanted with every step as he left his competitors behind. He raced to victory in the 5,000m and the 10,000m too! He won the heart of the nation with all of these achievements. After this success, Mo continued to flourish by dominating races and breaking records. He repeated the same triumphs in the 2016 Olympics in Rio de Janeiro. Mo has truly become the most successful British track athlete in modern Olympic history!
Early Life
In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
Legacy
Mo Farah is now an Olympic superstar who is known for his outstanding performance under pressure. He has grown into a hero for many. His victory celebration is called the ‘mobot’, an iconic dance that many of his fans have imitated! “I don’t just run to win. I run to inspire,” Mo says. Mo’s story has shown that by hard work and never giving up on dreams, triumph is achievable. Mo has also shown his humility and dedication to his sport. He created the Mo Farah Foundation which helps people affected by war and poverty in East Africa. He even received a knighthood from Queen Elizabeth II in 2017. Mo Farah is an inspiration around the world with his journey from humble beginnings to becoming a gold medal-winning Olympian!
Success
In 2012, Mo’s dreams finally became a reality at the London Olympics. He darted ahead and took an early lead in front of an ecstatic crowd. They chanted with every step as he left his competitors behind. He raced to victory in the 5,000m and the 10,000m too! He won the heart of the nation with all of these achievements. After this success, Mo continued to flourish by dominating races and breaking records. He repeated the same triumphs in the 2016 Olympics in Rio de Janeiro. Mo has truly become the most successful British track athlete in modern Olympic history!
People were amazed at his
overachievement.
_______________________
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Analyse Lesson 6
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
were amazed
Who/What
People
Sentence
People were amazed.
Add Detail: prefixes
People were amazed at his
overachievement.
_______________________
Re-read
Build
People were amazed at his
overachievement.
_______________________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
decided
Who/What
Usain
Sentence
Usain decided.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
Usain decided to run a race.
One morning,
__________________
Re-read
Build
One morning,
__________________
Usain decided to run a race.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Past tense
Place names
Third person
Text structure
Features
Farah's Footsteps: Find Out More About Mo Farah
Early Life In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
Place names
Past tense
Third person
Paragraph
Title
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Speech punctuation
Different verbs
Noun phrases
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Speech punctuation
Let me show you
Let's add the missing speech punctuation.
I never doubt myself Usain explained.
Believe in your dreams Usain Bolt said.
I run to inspire Mo says.
Reveal
Speech punctuation
Let's find and discuss
Legacy Mo Farah is now an Olympic superstar who is known for his outstanding performance under pressure. He has grown into a hero for many. His victory celebration is called the ‘mobot’, an iconic dance that many of his fans have imitated! “I don’t just run to win. I run to inspire,” Mo says. Mo’s story has shown that by hard work and never giving up on dreams, triumph is achievable. Mo has also shown his humility and dedication to his sport. He created the Mo Farah Foundation which helps people affected by war and poverty in East Africa. He even received a knighthood from Queen Elizabeth II in 2017. Mo Farah is an inspiration around the world with his journey from humble beginnings to becoming a gold medal-winning Olympian!
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Speech punctuation
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Speech punctuation
Different verbs
Noun phrases
Noun phrases
Let me show you
Drag the adjectives to create a noun phrase.
his outstanding
gold medal-winning
energetic young
Olympian
boy
performance
Reveal
Noun phrases
Let's find and discuss
Early Life In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Noun phrases
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Speech punctuation
Different verbs
Noun phrases
Different verbs
Let me show you
Drag the verbs that would interest the reader into the circle below.
darted
energetic
believed
pursue
hero
champion
tough
Reveal
flourish
Different verbs
Let's find and discuss
Success In 2012, Mo’s dreams finally became a reality at the London Olympics. He darted ahead and took an early lead in front of an ecstatic crowd. They chanted with every step as he left his competitors behind. He raced to victory in the 5,000m and the 10,000m too! He won the heart of the nation with all of these achievements. After this success, Mo continued to flourish by dominating races and breaking records. He repeated the same triumphs in the 2016 Olympics in Rio de Janeiro. Mo has truly become the most successful British track athlete in modern Olympic history!
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Different verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Which one shows speech marks being used correctly?
A I run to inspire, Mo says.
B I run to inspire, "Mo says."
C "I run to inspire, Mo says."
D "I run to inspire," Mo says.
Picture Me
Which image best shows this noun phrase?'a gold medal-winning Olympian'
Yes or No?
Do these phrases contain verbs to keep the reader interested?
A raced to victory
Yes
No
No
Yes
B a warm, playful smile
Yes
No
C dream of winning
Yes
D humility and dedication
No
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Early Life In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
Legacy Mo Farah is now an Olympic superstar who is known for his outstanding performance under pressure. He has grown into a hero for many. His victory celebration is called the ‘mobot’, an iconic dance that many of his fans have imitated! “I don’t just run to win. I run to inspire,” Mo says. Mo’s story has shown that by hard work and never giving up on dreams, triumph is achievable. Mo has also shown his humility and dedication to his sport. He created the Mo Farah Foundation which helps people affected by war and poverty in East Africa. He even received a knighthood from Queen Elizabeth II in 2017. Mo Farah is an inspiration around the world with his journey from humble beginnings to becoming a gold medal-winning Olympian!
Obstacles Young Mo went to school in London but life was challenging. He didn’t speak English and had to adjust to a new culture. His natural talent for distance running was quickly noticed. Therefore, his teacher encouraged him to practise running faster every day. Young Mo was set on the right track and he had found his purpose. He began competing at a running club although things soon became tough. For example, he faced the bitter misfortune of not qualifying for the 2008 Olympic Games. However, he believed that one day he could achieve his goals. He always dreamed of being an Olympic champion so he pushed himself to the limit. “Don’t dream of winning, train for it,” Mo once famously said. He pushed past all disbelief and strived for excellence in every race.
pursue
believed
darted
flourish
Usain decided to run a race.
One morning,
__________________
"I never doubt myself," Usain explained.
"Believe in your dreams," Usain Bolt said.
We aren't supposed to be here they pleaded.
"I run to inspire," Mo says.
Noun Phrases
gold medal-winning Olympian
energetic young boy
his outstanding performance
Obstacles Young Mo went to school in London but life was challenging. He didn’t speak English and had to adjust to a new culture. His natural talent for distance running was quickly noticed. Therefore, his teacher encouraged him to practise running faster every day. Young Mo was set on the right track and he had found his purpose. He began competing at a running club although things soon became tough. For example, he faced the bitter misfortune of not qualifying for the 2008 Olympic Games. However, he believed that one day he could achieve his goals. He always dreamed of being an Olympic champion so he pushed himself to the limit. “Don’t dream of winning, train for it,” Mo once famously said. He pushed past all disbelief and strived for excellence in every race.
Obstacles Young Mo went to school in London but life was challenging. He didn’t speak English and had to adjust to a new culture. His natural talent for distance running was quickly noticed. Therefore, his teacher encouraged him to practise running faster every day. Young Mo was set on the right track and he had found his purpose. He began competing at a running club although things soon became tough. For example, he faced the bitter misfortune of not qualifying for the 2008 Olympic Games. However, he believed that one day he could achieve his goals. He always dreamed of being an Olympic champion so he pushed himself to the limit. “Don’t dream of winning, train for it,” Mo once famously said. He pushed past all disbelief and strived for excellence in every race.
Success In 2012, Mo’s dreams finally became a reality at the London Olympics. He darted ahead and took an early lead in front of an ecstatic crowd. They chanted with every step as he left his competitors behind. He raced to victory in the 5,000m and the 10,000m too! He won the heart of the nation with all of these achievements. After this success, Mo continued to flourish by dominating races and breaking records. He repeated the same triumphs in the 2016 Olympics in Rio de Janeiro. Mo has truly become the most successful British track athlete in modern Olympic history!
Early Life In the East African country of Somalia, there lived an energetic young boy named Mohamed, or Mo for short! His dark hair and dark eyes were always accompanied by a warm, playful smile. When Mo was a child, there was a lot of trouble in his country. His family fled as a result, seeking refuge and safety in England. He faced hardship and uncertainty in his early life, but he always had the determination to pursue his dreams.
Legacy Mo Farah is now an Olympic superstar who is known for his outstanding performance under pressure. He has grown into a hero for many. His victory celebration is called the ‘mobot’, an iconic dance that many of his fans have imitated! “I don’t just run to win. I run to inspire,” Mo says. Mo’s story has shown that by hard work and never giving up on dreams, triumph is achievable. Mo has also shown his humility and dedication to his sport. He created the Mo Farah Foundation which helps people affected by war and poverty in East Africa. He even received a knighthood from Queen Elizabeth II in 2017. Mo Farah is an inspiration around the world with his journey from humble beginnings to becoming a gold medal-winning Olympian!
Success In 2012, Mo’s dreams finally became a reality at the London Olympics. He darted ahead and took an early lead in front of an ecstatic crowd. They chanted with every step as he left his competitors behind. He raced to victory in the 5,000m and the 10,000m too! He won the heart of the nation with all of these achievements. After this success, Mo continued to flourish by dominating races and breaking records. He repeated the same triumphs in the 2016 Olympics in Rio de Janeiro. Mo has truly become the most successful British track athlete in modern Olympic history!
People were amazed at his
overachievement.
_______________________