Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write diary sentences?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
saw
Who/What
Sentence
I saw.
Add Detail: a or an?
Which one shall I choose?
an
___
I saw
aeroplane.
I heard
loud bang.
__
Re-read
Build
I saw
aeroplane.
an
___
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
I heard
__
loud bang.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
terrified
Who/What
explosions
Sentence
The explosions terrified me.
Add Detail: noun phrase
terrified me.
The bright, blazing lights of the explosions
_______________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
The bright, blazing lights of the explosions
_______________________________________________________
terrified me.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write diary sentences?
Vehicle Text Illustrations
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
How?
When?
Illustration 15: Elephant wrapped in blanket
Illustration 9: At home on the sofa
Illustration 8: The keeper's house
Role on the Wall
Do
Say
Feel
Think
Then bring the character to life!
First
Describe
Behave
My turn to write diary sentences.
Your turn to write diary sentences.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write diary sentences?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
an
___
I saw
aeroplane.
I heard
__
loud bang.
terrified me.
The bright, blazing lights of the explosions
_______________________________________________________
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Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write diary sentences?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
saw
Who/What
Sentence
I saw.
Add Detail: a or an?
Which one shall I choose?
an
___
I saw
aeroplane.
I heard
loud bang.
__
Re-read
Build
I saw
aeroplane.
an
___
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Re-read
Build
I heard
__
loud bang.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
terrified
Who/What
explosions
Sentence
The explosions terrified me.
Add Detail: noun phrase
terrified me.
The bright, blazing lights of the explosions
_______________________________________________________
Re-read
Build
The bright, blazing lights of the explosions
_______________________________________________________
terrified me.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write diary sentences?
Vehicle Text Illustrations
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
How?
When?
Illustration 15: Elephant wrapped in blanket
Illustration 9: At home on the sofa
Illustration 8: The keeper's house
Role on the Wall
Do
Say
Feel
Think
Then bring the character to life!
First
Describe
Behave
My turn to write diary sentences.
Your turn to write diary sentences.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write diary sentences?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
an
___
I saw
aeroplane.
I heard
__
loud bang.
terrified me.
The bright, blazing lights of the explosions
_______________________________________________________