Write Lesson 13
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Restoring the Environment Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
whispered
Who/What
the wind
Sentence
The wind whispered.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the imposing towers of concrete.
_____________________________
The wind whispered through
Re-read
Build
the imposing towers of concrete.
_____________________________
Check
The wind whispered through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
made
Subject
the machines
Sentence
The machines made noise.
Add Detail: semi-colons in lists
the fearful clashing of metal;
The machines made such noise:
escaped steam screaming;
cogs whirring
and deafening blares like an alarm.
Re-read
Build
and deafening blares like an alarm.
the fearful clashing of metal;
escaped steam screaming;
The machines made such noise:
Check
cogs whirring
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Restoring the Environment Narrative?
My turn to write Part 4
plan
writer's voice
Sentence Checker
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
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Use your plan
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Add
Reread
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Sentence Choice
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Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Restoring the Environment Narrative?
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Feedback: Who did what well?
the fearful clashing of metal;
The machines made such noise:
escaped steam screaming;
cogs whirring
and deafening blares like an alarm.
the imposing towers of concrete.
_____________________________
The wind whispered through
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Write Lesson 13
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Restoring the Environment Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
whispered
Who/What
the wind
Sentence
The wind whispered.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the imposing towers of concrete.
_____________________________
The wind whispered through
Re-read
Build
the imposing towers of concrete.
_____________________________
Check
The wind whispered through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
made
Subject
the machines
Sentence
The machines made noise.
Add Detail: semi-colons in lists
the fearful clashing of metal;
The machines made such noise:
escaped steam screaming;
cogs whirring
and deafening blares like an alarm.
Re-read
Build
and deafening blares like an alarm.
the fearful clashing of metal;
escaped steam screaming;
The machines made such noise:
Check
cogs whirring
___________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Restoring the Environment Narrative?
My turn to write Part 4
plan
writer's voice
Sentence Checker
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Reread
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 4 of my Restoring the Environment Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the fearful clashing of metal;
The machines made such noise:
escaped steam screaming;
cogs whirring
and deafening blares like an alarm.
the imposing towers of concrete.
_____________________________
The wind whispered through