Immerse Lesson 1
Can I write predictions about a text?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Let's read the Vehicle Text Extract
There was once a girl who lived at the heart of a beautiful forest. Her name was Greta.
One morning, things weren’t quite as they should be. Greta stepped out into her garden and there, huddled together in the shadows of the trees, were all the animals of the forest.
A soft, silvery-brown wolf stepped forward, with his tail low to the ground.
“Please help us,” he whispered. “The forest is broken and we don’t know where to go. The Giants are ruining our home.”
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Can I write a prediction about this story?
I predict that ...
I think ...
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
stood
Who/What
the trees
Sentence
The trees stood tall.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
The gnarled, ancient trees in the silence
____________________________________
stood tall.
Re-read
Build
stood tall.
The gnarled, ancient trees in the silence
____________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
echoed
Subject
her cries
Sentence
Her cries echoed.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the tearing, raging machines in the ancient woodland.
________________________________________________
Her cries echoed through
Re-read
Build
the tearing, raging machines in the ancient woodland.
________________________________________________
Check
Her cries echoed through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write predictions about a text?
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The gnarled, ancient trees in the silence
____________________________________
stood tall.
the tearing, raging machines in the ancient woodland.
________________________________________________
Her cries echoed through
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Immerse Lesson 1
Can I write predictions about a text?
Talk Time: What's the story about?
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Let's read the Vehicle Text Extract
There was once a girl who lived at the heart of a beautiful forest. Her name was Greta. One morning, things weren’t quite as they should be. Greta stepped out into her garden and there, huddled together in the shadows of the trees, were all the animals of the forest. A soft, silvery-brown wolf stepped forward, with his tail low to the ground. “Please help us,” he whispered. “The forest is broken and we don’t know where to go. The Giants are ruining our home.”
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
When?
How?
Can I write a prediction about this story?
I predict that ...
I think ...
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
stood
Who/What
the trees
Sentence
The trees stood tall.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
The gnarled, ancient trees in the silence
____________________________________
stood tall.
Re-read
Build
stood tall.
The gnarled, ancient trees in the silence
____________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
echoed
Subject
her cries
Sentence
Her cries echoed.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
the tearing, raging machines in the ancient woodland.
________________________________________________
Her cries echoed through
Re-read
Build
the tearing, raging machines in the ancient woodland.
________________________________________________
Check
Her cries echoed through
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write predictions about a text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The gnarled, ancient trees in the silence
____________________________________
stood tall.
the tearing, raging machines in the ancient woodland.
________________________________________________
Her cries echoed through