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Analyse Lesson 6

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

was

Who/What

this

Sentence

This was an experience.

Add Detail: a or an?

Which one shall I choose?

The straight pathway was

__

guide.

experience I would never forget.

This was

an

___

Re-read

Build

__

The straight pathway was

guide.

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Re-read

Build

an

___

This was

experience I would never forget.

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

seemed

Who/What

boy

Sentence

The boy seemed friendly.

Add Detail: pronouns

him.

_____

The boy seemed friendly but I didn't trust

Re-read

Build

him.

_____

The boy seemed friendly but I didn't trust

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.

The Example Text has...

Paragraphs

Title

Effective verbs

Adjectives

Hook sentence

Text structure

Features

Lost at the Fair

The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.

Adjectives

Effective verbs

Paragraph

Hook sentence

Title

Click on / Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Speech marks

Short sentences

Words and phrases for feelings

Personification

Let's work in:

Stations
Pairs
Groups

Speech marks

Let me show you

Drag the speech marks into the correct places in the sentences below.

I am going to find Grandma,

I said.

Are you lost, little child?

whispered a voice.

Reveal

Speech marks

Let's find and discuss

“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Speech marks

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Speech marks

Short sentences

Words and phrases for feelings

Personification

Short sentences

Let me show you

Let's discuss how these short sentences impact the reader.

I could not breathe.

I was safe.

Short sentences

Let's find and discuss

“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Short sentences

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Speech marks

Short sentences

Words and phrases for feelings

Personification

Words and phrases for feelings

Let me show you

Onto the image, drag the words and phrases that best describe how the little boy felt when he was lost.

just an ordinary day

sights and sounds

swallow down my panic

eyes widened in fright

gazed upwards

desperate

Reveal

Words and phrases for feelings

Let's find and discuss

I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Words and phrases for feelings

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Speech marks

Short sentences

Words and phrases for feelings

Personification

Personification

Let me show you

Match each phrase to its meaning.

eerie music called me to listen

I felt trapped and overwhelmed.

the world was closing in on me

The bright lights looked inviting.

the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned

The strange music attracted my attention.

Reveal

Personification

Let's find and discuss

The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Personification

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up

Which One's Right?

Which one shows speech marks used correctly?

A "There you are, he said kindly."

B "There you are," he said kindly.

C There you are he said "kindly."

D There you are, "he said kindly."

True or False?

Short sentences can be exciting and have am impact on the reader.

True
False

Odd One Out

Which phrase does not show how the character is feeling?

A swallow down my panic

B the bright, twinkling lights

D eyes widened in fright

C heart thumped in my chest

Picture Me

Which image best shows this phrase to make an object sound human? 'the world was closing in on me'

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.

experience I would never forget.

This was

an

___

The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.

The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.

I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…

him.

_____

The boy seemed friendly but I didn't trust

“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.

Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.

“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.

Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.

The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.

Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.

The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.

The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.

The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.

swallow down my panic

eyes widened in fright

desperate

I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…

The straight pathway was

__

guide.

Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.

I am going to find Grandma,

I said.

Are you lost, little child?

whispered a voice.

I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…