Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
argued
Who/What
Sentence
I argued.
Add Detail: inverted commas
I argued.
"No,"
Re-read
Build
"No,"
I argued.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
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Your turn to write a sentence.
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Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
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Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
asked
Who/What
boy
Sentence
The boy asked.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
the boy asked.
"Can I swap my cow for your cake?"
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Can I swap my cow for your cake?
the boy asked
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Effective verbs
Adjectives
Hook sentence
Text structure
Features
Lost at the Fair
The day it happened was just an ordinary day.
My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
Adjectives
Effective verbs
Paragraph
Hook sentence
Title
Click on / Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
a or an?
Let me show you
an
an
familiar face
ordinary day
elderly woman
stop
Reveal
a or an?
Let's find and discuss
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
a or an?
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Word families
Let me show you
Drag the words that belong to the word family breath into the circle below.
shocked
breathy
gasp
tired
breathe
breathing
breathed
Reveal
inhale
Word families
Let's find and discuss
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots...
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Word families
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Adverbs
Let me show you
Drag the adverbs to the correct category: time (when) or place (where).
place
time
Choose three
Choose three
already
then
away
still
somewhere
backwards
Reveal
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
The day it happened was just an ordinary day.
My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Prepositions
Let me show you
Drag the prepositional phrases to the correct category: time or place.
place
time
Choose two
Choose two
before long
among the crowds
in the night air
until realising
Reveal
Prepositions
Let's find and discuss
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
a or an?
Which one is incorrect?
B a familiar face
A an ordinary day
C an elderly woman
D a old pair of boots
Tick Me
Which of these words belong to the word family for 'terror'? Tick two.
A terrified
B terrific
C terrifying
Check
D tearing
Which One's Right?
Which one is an adverb to show place?
A already
B away
C then
D again
Yes or No?
These prepositions are to show time.
A towards
No
Yes
B until
Yes
No
C before
Yes
No
D among
Yes
No
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
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Handwriting
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Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.
I argued.
"No,"
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
place
time
among the crowds
until realising
in the night air
before long
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
The day it happened was just an ordinary day.
My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
A terrified
C terrifying
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.
The day it happened was just an ordinary day.
My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
The day it happened was just an ordinary day.
My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…
the boy asked.
"Can I swap my cow for your cake?"
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
an
an
place
time
Choose three
Choose three
already
backwards
still
away
somewhere
then
breathy
breathing
breathe
breathed
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.
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Analyse Lesson 5
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
argued
Who/What
Sentence
I argued.
Add Detail: inverted commas
I argued.
"No,"
Re-read
Build
"No,"
I argued.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
asked
Who/What
boy
Sentence
The boy asked.
Add Detail: speech punctuation
the boy asked.
"Can I swap my cow for your cake?"
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
Can I swap my cow for your cake?
the boy asked
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Effective verbs
Adjectives
Hook sentence
Text structure
Features
Lost at the Fair
The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
Adjectives
Effective verbs
Paragraph
Hook sentence
Title
Click on / Click off
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
a or an?
Let me show you
an
an
familiar face
ordinary day
elderly woman
stop
Reveal
a or an?
Let's find and discuss
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
a or an?
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Word families
Let me show you
Drag the words that belong to the word family breath into the circle below.
shocked
breathy
gasp
tired
breathe
breathing
breathed
Reveal
inhale
Word families
Let's find and discuss
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots...
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Word families
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Adverbs
Let me show you
Drag the adverbs to the correct category: time (when) or place (where).
place
time
Choose three
Choose three
already
then
away
still
somewhere
backwards
Reveal
Adverbs
Let's find and discuss
The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Adverbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
a or an?
Adverbs
Word families
Prepositions
Prepositions
Let me show you
Drag the prepositional phrases to the correct category: time or place.
place
time
Choose two
Choose two
before long
among the crowds
in the night air
until realising
Reveal
Prepositions
Let's find and discuss
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Prepositions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Odd One Out
a or an?
Which one is incorrect?
B a familiar face
A an ordinary day
C an elderly woman
D a old pair of boots
Tick Me
Which of these words belong to the word family for 'terror'? Tick two.
A terrified
B terrific
C terrifying
Check
D tearing
Which One's Right?
Which one is an adverb to show place?
A already
B away
C then
D again
Yes or No?
These prepositions are to show time.
A towards
No
Yes
B until
Yes
No
C before
Yes
No
D among
Yes
No
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.
I argued.
"No,"
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
place
time
among the crowds
until realising
in the night air
before long
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
A terrified
C terrifying
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.
The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
The day it happened was just an ordinary day. My sister and I loved the fair that our parents took us to every year. We raced towards the bright, twinkling lights as they beckoned. We inhaled the delicious scent of usually forbidden foods, such as candy floss and hot dogs. The promise of an unforgiving winter had already arrived, although it was still September. If we tried hard enough, you could make out our breathy signatures in the night air.
The excitement was just too much for me. It had been drilled into me to stay safe. We were not to wander too far away, but the sights and sounds were just too enticing. Rides tempted me closer, making me giddy with their speed. Crowds thronged and bustled. The repetitive, slightly eerie music called me to listen. Before long, I could no longer see anyone I knew. The faces surrounding me were unfamiliar. Alien. I was lost.
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…
the boy asked.
"Can I swap my cow for your cake?"
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.
“Are you lost, my little one?” a voice said. I gazed upwards. There in front of me was an elderly woman, dressed in black from head to toe. My eyes widened in fright and I staggered backwards. “N-n-no,” I stammered. Turning and running, I found myself even further concealed in the crowd. I was unable to see properly. I could not breathe. I lurched to a stop as a cold pair of hands grabbed me from behind. I gasped.
an
an
place
time
Choose three
Choose three
already
backwards
still
away
somewhere
then
breathy
breathing
breathe
breathed
I tried to swallow down my panic as I gazed around frantically. Faces swam before me and lights blurred my vision. I blinked and tried to take a breath. Just then, it felt like the world was closing in on me. Terrified, I gasped for air as I stumbled among the crowds, desperate to see a familiar face. My heart thumped in my chest and my breathing quickened. My eyes darted from one direction to another. Surely they must be somewhere! Suddenly, as I looked down, my eyes halted on an old, worn pair of pointed, leather boots…
Spinning around, I was wild with fear. I tried desperately to wriggle out of their clutch until realising… it was my dad. “There you are,” he said kindly. Sobbing with relief, I threw my arms around his neck. I breathed in his familiar, reassuring smell. I was safe.