Analyse Lesson 6
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
is
Who/What
life
Sentence
Life is inside this habitat.
Add Detail: prepositions
There is so much life
inside
this habitat.
________
Re-read
Build
this habitat.
inside
________
There is so much life
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
are
Who/What
landscapes
Sentence
Landscapes are carved.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
Underneath the waterfall,
landscapes are carved.
__________________________________
Re-read
Build
Underneath the waterfall,
__________________________________
landscapes are carved.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Opening and closing
Paragraphs
Adjectives
Different tenses
First person
Features
Text structure
Dear Earth,
I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
Paragraph
Opening and closing
Different tenses
First person
Adjectives
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Effective verbs
Questions
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Words and phrases for feelings
Let me show you
Drag the words and phrases that best describe how the writer of the letter feels.
deforestation
my heart aches
hear the sounds
filled with dread
takes my breath away
birds soar
Reveal
Words and phrases for feelings
Let's find and discuss
Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases for feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Effective verbs
Questions
Questions
Let me show you
Let's discuss how these questions make the reader think.
What will they do if their habitats are destroyed?
Can you imagine the difference it would make?
Questions
Let's find and discuss
Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Questions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Effective verbs
Questions
Let me show you
Effective verbs
Drag the most effective verb to complete each sentence.
We must help our world __________ .
get better
recover
Planting seeds helps the forest to __________ .
flourish
grow
Reveal
Effective verbs
Let's find and discuss
We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Effective verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Picture Me
Which image best shows this phrase?'leaves a hole in my heart'
Tick Me
Which options need a question mark? Tick two.
A What about their homes
B What is happening to our planet is worrying
C How beautiful Earth is
Check
D Can you imagine the difference we could make
Yes or No?
Are the following words verbs that help the reader imagine what is happening?
A soar
Yes
No
B chased
No
Yes
C homes
Yes
No
D flourish
Yes
No
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
recover
We must help our world .
flourish
Planting seeds helps the forest to .
We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made.
With love,
Tessa
Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.
There is so much life
inside
this habitat.
________
We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made.
With love,
Tessa
Dear Earth,
I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.
In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.
my heart aches
filled with dread
takes my breath away
A What about their homes?
B What is happening to our planet is worrying.
C How beautiful Earth is!
D Can you imagine the difference we could make?
Dear Earth,
I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.
Underneath the waterfall,
landscapes are carved.
__________________________________
In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.
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Analyse Lesson 6
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
is
Who/What
life
Sentence
Life is inside this habitat.
Add Detail: prepositions
There is so much life
inside
this habitat.
________
Re-read
Build
this habitat.
inside
________
There is so much life
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
are
Who/What
landscapes
Sentence
Landscapes are carved.
Add Detail: fronted adverbials
Underneath the waterfall,
landscapes are carved.
__________________________________
Re-read
Build
Underneath the waterfall,
__________________________________
landscapes are carved.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Opening and closing
Paragraphs
Adjectives
Different tenses
First person
Features
Text structure
Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
Paragraph
Opening and closing
Different tenses
First person
Adjectives
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Effective verbs
Questions
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Words and phrases for feelings
Let me show you
Drag the words and phrases that best describe how the writer of the letter feels.
deforestation
my heart aches
hear the sounds
filled with dread
takes my breath away
birds soar
Reveal
Words and phrases for feelings
Let's find and discuss
Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases for feelings
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Effective verbs
Questions
Questions
Let me show you
Let's discuss how these questions make the reader think.
What will they do if their habitats are destroyed?
Can you imagine the difference it would make?
Questions
Let's find and discuss
Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Reveal
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Questions
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases for feelings
Effective verbs
Questions
Let me show you
Effective verbs
Drag the most effective verb to complete each sentence.
We must help our world __________ .
get better
recover
Planting seeds helps the forest to __________ .
flourish
grow
Reveal
Effective verbs
Let's find and discuss
We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Reveal
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Effective verbs
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Picture Me
Which image best shows this phrase?'leaves a hole in my heart'
Tick Me
Which options need a question mark? Tick two.
A What about their homes
B What is happening to our planet is worrying
C How beautiful Earth is
Check
D Can you imagine the difference we could make
Yes or No?
Are the following words verbs that help the reader imagine what is happening?
A soar
Yes
No
B chased
No
Yes
C homes
Yes
No
D flourish
Yes
No
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
recover
We must help our world .
flourish
Planting seeds helps the forest to .
We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa
Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.
There is so much life
inside
this habitat.
________
We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa
Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.
In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.
my heart aches
filled with dread
takes my breath away
A What about their homes?
B What is happening to our planet is worrying.
C How beautiful Earth is!
D Can you imagine the difference we could make?
Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.
Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.
Underneath the waterfall,
landscapes are carved.
__________________________________
In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.