Y3F Dear Earth Analyse L5

Analyse Lesson 5

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

am

Who/What

Sentence

I am worried.

Add Detail: a or an?

Which one shall I choose?

an

important habitat is being harmed.

I am worried that

___

__

I dislike seeing damage to such

special place.

Re-read

Build

important habitat is being harmed.

an

___

I am worried that

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Re-read

Build

special place.

__

I dislike seeing damage to such

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

are

Who/What

oceans

Sentence

Oceans are powerful.

Add Detail: pronouns

are polluted.

Oceans are powerful but

they

______

Re-read

Build

are polluted.

they

______

Oceans are powerful but

___________________________________________________________________________

Check

My turn to write a sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

Sentence time over! Click to move on.

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.

The Example Text has...

Opening and closing

Paragraphs

Adjectives

Different tenses

First person

Features

Text structure

Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.

Paragraph

Opening and closing

Different tenses

First person

Adjectives

Click on / Click off

Writer's Knowledge

Prepositions

a or an?

Conjunctions

Present perfect tense

Let's work in:

Stations

Pairs

Groups

Let me show you

a or an?

Help me add a or an before each word.

an

an

echo

mountain

vast ocean

ancient giant

Reveal

a or an?

Let's find and discuss

Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.

Reveal

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

a or an?

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Prepositions

a or an?

Conjunctions

Present perfect tense

Let me show you

Conjunctions

if

as

when

The waves dance under the sun the seagulls circle above.

Ripples spread across the water the wind blows.

Many animals will lose their home the snow keeps melting.

I worry _______________________.

because

Reveal

Conjunctions

Let's find and discuss

Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Conjunctions

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Prepositions

a or an?

Conjunctions

Present perfect tense

Prepositions

Let me show you

Drag the preposition to complete each sentence.

through

since

above

before

Birds soar the trees and the soft clouds.

Rocky mountains have stood the beginning of time.

We must do something it's too late.

Reveal

Prepositions

Let's find and discuss

In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Prepositions

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Writer's Knowledge

Prepositions

a or an?

Conjunctions

Present perfect tense

Present perfect tense

Let me show you

Match the simple past tense verb to its present perfect tense form.

The lagoon has sparkled under the sunlight.

Polar bears lived on the icebergs.

Waves crashed against the sandy shore.

Polar bears have lived on the icebergs.

The lagoon sparkled under the sunlight.

Waves have crashed against the sandy shore.

Reveal

Present perfect tense

Let's find and discuss

Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.

Replace?

Remove?

Feel

Imagine

Reveal

Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?

Present perfect tense

Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?

Reveal

Question Quiz Time

Secret Selector

Team Competition

How will we answer our questions today?

Vote

ThumbsUp

ThinkPair Share

Bob Up

Odd One Out

Which one does not show 'an' used correctly?

B an habitat

A an adventure

C an environment

D an ocean

Which One's Right?

Which one is a conjunction to join sentences?

B what

A above

C when

D always

Tick Me

Which of these are prepositions to show time? Tick two.

A before dawn

B above the trees

C from so high

Check

D in the morning

True or False?

The present perfect tense shows us what has been happening recently.

True

False

Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 1-4 in the Example Text?

CEW

Handwriting

Writing Effects

Spelling

Ideas

Other...

Feedback: Who did what well?

are polluted.

Oceans are powerful but

they

______

an

important habitat is being harmed.

I am worried that

___

Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.

Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.

Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.

We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa

In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.

The waves dance under the sun the seagulls circle above.

as

Ripples spread across the water the wind blows.

when

Many animals will lose their home the snow keeps melting.

if

Despite all this wonder to see and hear in your jungles, things are not all perfect. Trees are being cut down and I’m frightened for the animals that live there. What about their homes? What will they do if their habitats are destroyed? An enormous number of birds, monkeys and snakes have been chased off when machines arrive, even before dawn! This deforestation has left empty, dry patches and each empty patch leaves a hole in my heart. This must hurt you, too.

In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.

A before dawn

D in the morning

In our world, jungles are fascinating. Birds of all sizes and shapes soar above their trees. I long to join them on an adventure through the soft clouds. They get to see the jungles from so high up! I am stunned by the colours that spill from the sunsets there. I love to hear the sounds of all the animals that have made their homes within these mighty, green canopies.

We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa

an

echo

mountain

vast ocean

an

ancient giant

Birds soar the trees and the soft clouds.

above

through

Rocky mountains have stood the beginning of time.

since

We must do something it's too late.

before

We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa

We are taught to always help others so I want everyone to help you, dear world. We must help our world recover before it’s too late. Tomorrow, I am going to carefully plant seeds to grow new trees, so the birds, monkeys and snakes can return and flourish. If only every person would plant a tree for your jungles! Can you imagine the difference that would make? I promise to tell as many people as I can how wonderful your magnificent jungles are, so we can start to mend the mess we have made. With love, Tessa

Dear Earth, I’m writing a letter to you because I care about your majestic jungles and I am worried about what is happening to them. You see, I love exploring them and it is my favourite place to be. I have been learning all about them in school. Each day, I’m noticing that a few things are changing. Sadly, there are some changes I deeply dislike as I know they’re hurting you.

__

I dislike seeing damage to such

special place.