Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a pleasant environment setting description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
turned
Who/What
the ground
Sentence
The ground turned.
Add Detail: relative clauses
where the machines were.
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
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Re-read
Build
where the machines were.
____________________________________
Check
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
the meadow
Sentence
The meadow was still.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
The meadow was still; the meadow was at peace.
________________________
___________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
The meadow was still the meadow was at peace.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a pleasant environment setting description?
Freeze Frame
What might they say?
How can you show how they feel?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How will their body move?
How might they react?
Illustration 1: the pleasant natural environment at the beginning of the story
My turn to write a pleasant environment setting description.
Your turn to write a pleasant environment setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a pleasant environment setting description?
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where the machines were.
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
____________________________________
The meadow was still; the meadow was at peace.
________________________
___________________
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Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a pleasant environment setting description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
turned
Who/What
the ground
Sentence
The ground turned.
Add Detail: relative clauses
where the machines were.
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
____________________________________
Re-read
Build
where the machines were.
____________________________________
Check
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
the meadow
Sentence
The meadow was still.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
The meadow was still; the meadow was at peace.
________________________
___________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
The meadow was still the meadow was at peace.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a pleasant environment setting description?
Freeze Frame
What might they say?
How can you show how they feel?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How will their body move?
How might they react?
Illustration 1: the pleasant natural environment at the beginning of the story
My turn to write a pleasant environment setting description.
Your turn to write a pleasant environment setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a pleasant environment setting description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
where the machines were.
The ground turned into a mess of concrete
____________________________________
The meadow was still; the meadow was at peace.
________________________
___________________