Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
shimmered
Who/What
grass
Sentence
Grass shimmered.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the hazy, golden sunshine over the fields.
__________________________________________________________
Grass shimmered in
Re-read
Build
Grass shimmered in
the hazy, golden sunshine over the fields.
__________________________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
gave
Subject
the woodland
Sentence
The woodland gave her joy.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
The vibrant, vivid colours in the woodland
______________________________________
gave her joy.
Re-read
Build
gave her joy.
The vibrant, vivid colours in the woodland
______________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a simile poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
wiry
murmuring
nurtured
wailing
fragment
drifted
Hover for definitions!
a little piece of wilderness
no-one could hear themselves think
in that endless pause
the hearts of those few
Book Time
Let me show you the front cover of the Vehicle Text.
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
Let me read the beginning of 'Varmints' up to 'So they stopped thinking.' Were your predictions correct?
How?
When?
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
What is around them?
How might they say it?
Illustration 1: the Others building the city with metal cables
How might they react?
How will their body move?
My turn to write a simile poem.
Your turn to write a simile poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Book Time
Let me read all of 'Varmints,' to reveal the ending.
How did the settings contrast in the narrative?
In what ways did the mood and atmosphere change throughout the story?
Can I write a simile poem?
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Feedback: Who did what well?
The vibrant, vivid colours in the woodland
______________________________________
gave her joy.
the hazy, golden sunshine over the fields.
__________________________________________________________
Grass shimmered in
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Immerse Lesson 2
Can I write a simile poem?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
shimmered
Who/What
grass
Sentence
Grass shimmered.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the hazy, golden sunshine over the fields.
__________________________________________________________
Grass shimmered in
Re-read
Build
Grass shimmered in
the hazy, golden sunshine over the fields.
__________________________________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
gave
Subject
the woodland
Sentence
The woodland gave her joy.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrase
The vibrant, vivid colours in the woodland
______________________________________
gave her joy.
Re-read
Build
gave her joy.
The vibrant, vivid colours in the woodland
______________________________________
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a simile poem?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
wiry
murmuring
nurtured
wailing
fragment
drifted
Hover for definitions!
a little piece of wilderness
no-one could hear themselves think
in that endless pause
the hearts of those few
Book Time
Let me show you the front cover of the Vehicle Text.
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
Let me read the beginning of 'Varmints' up to 'So they stopped thinking.' Were your predictions correct?
How?
When?
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
What is around them?
How might they say it?
Illustration 1: the Others building the city with metal cables
How might they react?
How will their body move?
My turn to write a simile poem.
Your turn to write a simile poem.
Use your Sentence Checker
Book Time
Let me read all of 'Varmints,' to reveal the ending.
How did the settings contrast in the narrative?
In what ways did the mood and atmosphere change throughout the story?
Can I write a simile poem?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The vibrant, vivid colours in the woodland
______________________________________
gave her joy.
the hazy, golden sunshine over the fields.
__________________________________________________________
Grass shimmered in