Write Lesson 10
Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Transformation Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cried
Who/What
girl
Sentence
The girl cried.
Add Detail: Inverted Commas
"What a mess this place is,"
the girl cried.
Re-read
Build
"What a mess this place is,"
the girl cried.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
Who/What
she
Sentence
She sighed.
Add Detail: Speech Punctuation
"There must be something I can do."
She sighed,
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
She sighed
There must be something I can do
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Transformation Narrative?
My turn to write Part 1
plan
Sentence Checker
writer's voice
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Re-read
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Transformation Narrative?
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Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
"What a mess this place is,"
the girl cried.
She sighed,
"There must be something I can do."
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Write Lesson 10
Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Transformation Narrative?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
cried
Who/What
girl
Sentence
The girl cried.
Add Detail: Inverted Commas
"What a mess this place is,"
the girl cried.
Re-read
Build
"What a mess this place is,"
the girl cried.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
Who/What
she
Sentence
She sighed.
Add Detail: Speech Punctuation
"There must be something I can do."
She sighed,
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
She sighed
There must be something I can do
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Transformation Narrative?
My turn to write Part 1
plan
Sentence Checker
writer's voice
Working Wall
Watch me use my...
Your turn to write
Use the Sentence Checker
Use the Working Wall
Use your plan
Say before you write
Edit
Add
Re-read
Share, Edit, Review
Effect
Feel
Edit
Imagine
Sentence Choice
Word Choice
Can I use my plan to write Part 1 of my Transformation Narrative?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
"What a mess this place is,"
the girl cried.
She sighed,
"There must be something I can do."