Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
girl
Sentence
The girl was desperate.
Add Detail: Word Families
desperate
to help.
The girl was
_____________
Re-read
Build
to help.
desperate
_____________
The girl was
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
were shining
Who/What
flowers
Sentence
The flowers were shining.
Add Detail: Plural and Possessive -s
flowers'
colours were shining.
The
__________
Re-read
Build
colours were shining.
flowers'
__________
The
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read The Secret Sky Garden up to 'That feeling. Like an ache, a hole...'
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
desperate
to help.
The girl was
_____________
flowers'
colours were shining.
The
__________
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Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a character description?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Who/What
girl
Sentence
The girl was desperate.
Add Detail: Word Families
desperate
to help.
The girl was
_____________
Re-read
Build
to help.
desperate
_____________
The girl was
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
were shining
Who/What
flowers
Sentence
The flowers were shining.
Add Detail: Plural and Possessive -s
flowers'
colours were shining.
The
__________
Re-read
Build
colours were shining.
flowers'
__________
The
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a character description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read The Secret Sky Garden up to 'That feeling. Like an ache, a hole...'
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a character description.
Your turn to write a character description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a character description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
desperate
to help.
The girl was
_____________
flowers'
colours were shining.
The
__________