Immerse Lesson 5
Can I write a Vlogger Transcript about an Olympian?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
scored
Who/What
she
Sentence
She scored a 10.
Add Detail: commas for clarity
Forced to perfect her skills at a young age, she scored a 10 at the Olympic
Games, her faultless performance stunning the audience.
Re-read
Build
Use the commas to separate the clauses.
Check
Forced to perfect her skills at a young age she scored a 10 at the Olympic
___________________________________________________________________________
Games her faultless performance stunning the audience.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
she
Sentence
She was dedicated.
Add Detail: dashes for independent clauses
She was dedicated – her focus was entirely on being the best.
____________________________________________
_____________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the dash to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
She was dedicated her focus was entirely on being the best.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a Vlogger Transcript about an Olympian?
Vehicle Text Recap: Olympian Facts
Stories for Boys Who Dare to be Different 2: • Tom Daley (p.196) • Emil Zátopek (p.64)
Re-read your chosen Olympian’s Vehicle Text page, then your Gathering Research resource page to recap on what you have learned about the athlete.
Goodnight Stories for Rebel Girls 2: • Beatrice Vio (p.18) • Nadia Comăneci (p.128)
Gathering Research page
Live-Action: Vlogger Updates
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
How?
When?
In pairs, act as a vlogger and camera crew member. Swap roles.
My turn to write a Vlogger Transcript.
Your turn to write a Vlogger Transcript.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a Vlogger Transcript?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
She was dedicated – her focus was entirely on being the best.
____________________________________________
_____________________
Forced to perfect her skills at a young age, she scored a 10 at the Olympic
Games, her faultless performance stunning the audience.
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Immerse Lesson 5
Can I write a Vlogger Transcript about an Olympian?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
scored
Who/What
she
Sentence
She scored a 10.
Add Detail: commas for clarity
Forced to perfect her skills at a young age, she scored a 10 at the Olympic
Games, her faultless performance stunning the audience.
Re-read
Build
Use the commas to separate the clauses.
Check
Forced to perfect her skills at a young age she scored a 10 at the Olympic
___________________________________________________________________________
Games her faultless performance stunning the audience.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
Subject
she
Sentence
She was dedicated.
Add Detail: dashes for independent clauses
She was dedicated – her focus was entirely on being the best.
____________________________________________
_____________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the dash to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
She was dedicated her focus was entirely on being the best.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a Vlogger Transcript about an Olympian?
Vehicle Text Recap: Olympian Facts
Stories for Boys Who Dare to be Different 2: • Tom Daley (p.196) • Emil Zátopek (p.64)
Re-read your chosen Olympian’s Vehicle Text page, then your Gathering Research resource page to recap on what you have learned about the athlete.
Goodnight Stories for Rebel Girls 2: • Beatrice Vio (p.18) • Nadia Comăneci (p.128)
Gathering Research page
Live-Action: Vlogger Updates
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
How?
When?
In pairs, act as a vlogger and camera crew member. Swap roles.
My turn to write a Vlogger Transcript.
Your turn to write a Vlogger Transcript.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a Vlogger Transcript?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
She was dedicated – her focus was entirely on being the best.
____________________________________________
_____________________
Forced to perfect her skills at a young age, she scored a 10 at the Olympic
Games, her faultless performance stunning the audience.