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He is known all over the place as one of the best Olympians ever.
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Olympics Daily Blog:The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
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She refused to give up she invented a technique that worked just for her.
He had no interest in running he felt that he was terribly unfit.
She scored a 10 at the Olympic Games this had never been done before.
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Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion
With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
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There is much to be learned from this record setting athlete.
It was yet another medal for this well known Olympian.
She was determined not to leave the stage empty handed.
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Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives
It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.
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made a splash
swimming cap
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got in the water
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Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion
With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
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100-metre
most decorated Olympian in history
growing anxiety
astounding
controversy in the press
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Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash
Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
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A He was made to take nine – tests of course, he passed every single one.
B He was made to take nine tests of course, he passed – every single one.
C He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one.
D He was made – to take nine tests of course, he passed every single one.
Odd One Out
Which of these does not require a hyphen to keep the meaning clear?
B performance-enhancing
A little-known
D former-athlete
C 100-metre
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A most decorated Olympian in history
B society’s expectation
C triumph over adversity
D now retired swimmer
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Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion
With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash
Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
made a splash
put his zest to the test
gone swimmingly
Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives
It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash
Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion
With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash
Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
uncover
___________
Read our next update to
more.
She refused to give up - she invented a technique that worked just for her.
He had no interest in running - he felt that he was terribly unfit.
She scored a 10 at the Olympic Games - this had never been done before.
Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives
It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.
There is much to be learned from this record-setting athlete.
It was yet another medal for this well-known Olympian.
She was determined not to leave the stage empty-handed.
most decorated Olympian in history
astounding
an inspiration
INFORMAL
He is known all over the place as one of the best Olympians ever.
____________________
________________________
He is widely regarded as one of the most successful Olympians in history.
____________________________________
________________
FORMAL
Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives
It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.
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Analyse Lesson 7
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
must read
Who/What
you
Sentence
You must read our update.
Add Detail: verb prefixes
uncover
___________
Read our next update to
more.
Re-read
Build
uncover
___________
Read our next update to
more.
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
is
Subject
he
Sentence
He is known.
Add Detail: formal or informal vocabulary
He is known all over the place as one of the best Olympians ever.
____________________
________________________
Re-read
Build
Match the formal and informal labels to the correct sentence.
FORMAL
Check
INFORMAL
___________________________________________________________________________
He is known all over the place as one of the best Olympians ever.
____________________
________________________
He is widely regarded as one of the most successful Olympians in history.
____________________________________
________________
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-8 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has
The Example Text has...
Title
Sections
Subheadings
Third person
Time references
Text structure
Features
Olympics Daily Blog:The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
Title
Sections
Time references
Subheadings
Third person
Click on Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Dashes to add information
Phrases to entertain the reader
Hyphens for clarity
Words and phrases to describe talent
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Dashes to add information
Let me show you
Add dashes to correctly punctuate the sentences.
She refused to give up she invented a technique that worked just for her.
He had no interest in running he felt that he was terribly unfit.
She scored a 10 at the Olympic Games this had never been done before.
Reveal
Dashes to add information
Let's find and discuss
Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Dashes to add information
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Dashes to add information
Phrases to entertain the reader
Hyphens for clarity
Words and phrases to describe talent
Let me show you
Hyphens for clarity
Add the hyphens to make the meaning of each sentence clear.
There is much to be learned from this record setting athlete.
It was yet another medal for this well known Olympian.
She was determined not to leave the stage empty handed.
Reveal
Hyphens for clarity
Let's find and discuss
Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.
Replace?
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Hyphens for clarity
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Dashes to add information
Phrases to entertain the reader
Hyphens for clarity
Words and phrases to describe talent
Phrases to entertain the reader
Let me show you
Reveal
Drag the phrases that effectively entertain the reader onto the podium .
made a splash
swimming cap
put his zest to the test
got in the water
gone swimmingly
retired swimmer
Phrases to entertain the reader
Let's find and discuss
Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Phrases to entertain the reader
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Phrases to entertain the reader
Hyphens for clarity
Words and phrases to describe talent
Words and phrases to describe talent
Let me show you
Drag the words and phrases that describe the Olympian's talent into the circle.
100-metre
most decorated Olympian in history
growing anxiety
astounding
controversy in the press
an inspiration
Check
Words and phrases to describe talent
Let's find and discuss
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
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Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Words and phrases to describe talent
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Which one shows the correct use of a dash to add more information?
A He was made to take nine – tests of course, he passed every single one.
B He was made to take nine tests of course, he passed – every single one.
C He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one.
D He was made – to take nine tests of course, he passed every single one.
Odd One Out
Which of these does not require a hyphen to keep the meaning clear?
B performance-enhancing
A little-known
D former-athlete
C 100-metre
Picture Me
Which image best shows the meaning of the entertaining phrase ‘Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about his extraordinary athlete’?
Tick Me
Which of these describe the Olympian’s talent? Tick two.
A most decorated Olympian in history
B society’s expectation
C triumph over adversity
D now retired swimmer
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Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
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Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
Day 3: The Legacy of an Olympian and Wellbeing Champion With the title of history’s most successful Olympian under his swimming cap, Michael also holds the all-time records for gold medals earned in individual events. Twenty-three of his Olympic medals are gold, with a further eighty-two medals won in other major international swimming competitions. Yet, none of these great achievements were made without considerable mental challenge: the athlete faced growing anxiety from the pressure of society’s expectation for him to constantly continue succeeding. Michael knew he had to put his wellbeing first: he explained in another interview that therapy and journalling helped him find ways to understand himself better. Speaking openly about this, Michael explained, “We are supposed to be big, strong and macho, but I have had this for 17 years and by speaking about it we are reaching out.” Michael Phelps truly is an inspiration to us all – the former athlete continues his work today as a mental health advocate.
Day 1: The Swimmer Who Really Makes a Splash Amongst the many marvellous athletes of the world, there is one who has truly made a splash. Michael Phelps, an American former competitive swimmer, is known as the most decorated Olympian in history. You may have heard of him already – were you to glance into the world of the Olympics, you would not have to look far before his name appeared. So today, let’s take it right back to where it all started... Hailing from Maryland, USA, Michael began swimming at the age of seven. He had always been filled with energy: he often found it difficult to concentrate or control his liveliness. This, of course, never stopped such a determined character from achieving – the swimming pool quickly became a haven where Michael could put his zest to the test. In an interview from 2016, the now retired swimmer remembered, “The only reason I ever got in the water was my mum. She wanted me to just learn how to swim,” and we are very glad she did. His naturally flexible ankles paired with the impressive width of his wingspan meant that Michael would soon be participating in national competitions, then worldwide championships! In our next blog update, learn more about this astounding athlete’s accomplishments and his triumph over adversity.
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She refused to give up - she invented a technique that worked just for her.
He had no interest in running - he felt that he was terribly unfit.
She scored a 10 at the Olympic Games - this had never been done before.
Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.
There is much to be learned from this record-setting athlete.
It was yet another medal for this well-known Olympian.
She was determined not to leave the stage empty-handed.
most decorated Olympian in history
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He is known all over the place as one of the best Olympians ever.
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He is widely regarded as one of the most successful Olympians in history.
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Day 2: High Jumps and Low Dives It is a little-known fact, but Michael wasn’t always a keen swimmer: as a child, his great anxiety was putting his face under the water. Over the time he had taken to build up enough courage, he fought through this fear and learned to appreciate the feeling of being submerged. This is a lesson to many of us – if he were not so determined, he may never have gone on to achieve what he has done today. From gaining a national record for the 100-metre butterfly at just ten years old, to earning a total of twenty-eight Olympic medals, he certainly has led a life of outstanding achievements. If there were ever a symbol of perseverance, it would be Michael Phelps. Today, he still holds some of the longest-standing world records for pool relay. Despite this, things haven’t always gone swimmingly for this Olympian. During the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing, Michael swam so well that rumours over him using performance-enhancing drugs caused controversy in the press. He was made to take nine tests – of course, he passed every single one. His athletic prowess was all down to his natural talent. Dive into tomorrow’s update for more about this extraordinary athlete.