Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a determination paragraph?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
pounded
Who/What
she
Sentence
She pounded the ground.
Add Detail: prepositions
under
________
She pounded the ground
her feet.
Re-read
Build
She pounded the ground
under
________
her feet.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
promised
Verb
girl
Who/What
The girl promised.
Sentence
Add Detail: speech punctuation
the girl promised herself.
"I will show my strength,"
Re-read
Build
the girl promised herself.
"I will show my strength,"
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a determination paragraph?
Vehicle Text Recap
Hover for examples of the language used to create a sense of the character’s determination.
Verb choices
Let me re-read the Vehicle Text story from where the Corinthian girl is training for the Olympics to when she has started the race. How is determination built?
Short clauses
Illustration:the Corinthian girl running her race at the Olympics
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a determination paragraph.
Your turn to write a determination paragraph.
Your turn to write a character dialogue paragraph.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a determination paragraph?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
under
________
She pounded the ground
her feet.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly.
Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side.
Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat.
Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax.
Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards.
Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically.
Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm.
Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
the girl promised herself.
"I will show my strength,"
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
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Analyse Lesson 7
Can I write a determination paragraph?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
chap
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
pounded
Who/What
she
Sentence
She pounded the ground.
Add Detail: prepositions
under
________
She pounded the ground
her feet.
Re-read
Build
She pounded the ground
under
________
her feet.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
promised
Verb
girl
Who/What
The girl promised.
Sentence
Add Detail: speech punctuation
the girl promised herself.
"I will show my strength,"
Re-read
Build
the girl promised herself.
"I will show my strength,"
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a determination paragraph?
Vehicle Text Recap
Hover for examples of the language used to create a sense of the character’s determination.
Verb choices
Let me re-read the Vehicle Text story from where the Corinthian girl is training for the Olympics to when she has started the race. How is determination built?
Short clauses
Illustration:the Corinthian girl running her race at the Olympics
Role on the Wall
Think
Say
Do
Then bring the character to life!
First
Feel
Describe
Behave
My turn to write a determination paragraph.
Your turn to write a determination paragraph.
Your turn to write a character dialogue paragraph.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a determination paragraph?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
under
________
She pounded the ground
her feet.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
the girl promised herself.
"I will show my strength,"
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.