Plan Lesson 9
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smiles
Who/What
Burdick
Sentence
Burdick smiles.
Add Detail: cohesive devices
once
______
he recognises the image.
Burdick smiles
Re-read
Build
he recognises the image.
once
______
Check
Burdick smiles
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was hidden
Subject
answer
Sentence
The answer was hidden.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
The answer was hidden in plain sight; he points out what most readers have ignored.
__________________________________________
_________________________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
The answer was hidden in plain sight he points out what most readers have ignored.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Private Investigator Report?
How Private Investigator Reports Work
First: Introduce the mystery and explain what is being investigated so the reader understands the case.
Then:Describe the clues, evidence, images or events and include information from interviews that help explain what might have happened.
Finally:Reveal the conclusions and explain what the investigation discovered or what parts of the mystery might still remain unsolved.
Let me show you how to plan.
Your Plan: The Mysterious Illustrations of Harris Burdick
Teacher's Plan: The Peculiar Illustrations of Harris Burdick
Example Text: The Curious Illustrations of Harris Burdick
Part 1: Introduction to the mystery
Part 2: Describe first image and Harris Burdick reveals the mystery behind it
What good writing looks like
This will show you how to plan and write
Part 3: Describe second image and Harris Burdick reveals the mystery behind it
Part 4: Describe third image and Harris Burdick reveals the mystery behind it
Part 5: Conclusion: Why did Harris Burdick disappear?
My Turn: Part 1
Your Turn: Part 1
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 2
Your Turn: Part 2
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 3
Your Turn: Part 3
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 4
Your Turn: Part 4
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 5
Your Turn: Part 5
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Completed Plan
Click
Now talk through your plan
Can I plan my Private Investigator Report?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
once
______
he recognises the image.
Burdick smiles
The answer was hidden in plain sight; he points out what most readers have ignored.
__________________________________________
_________________________________
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Plan Lesson 9
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smiles
Who/What
Burdick
Sentence
Burdick smiles.
Add Detail: cohesive devices
once
______
he recognises the image.
Burdick smiles
Re-read
Build
he recognises the image.
once
______
Check
Burdick smiles
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was hidden
Subject
answer
Sentence
The answer was hidden.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
The answer was hidden in plain sight; he points out what most readers have ignored.
__________________________________________
_________________________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
The answer was hidden in plain sight he points out what most readers have ignored.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Private Investigator Report?
How Private Investigator Reports Work
First: Introduce the mystery and explain what is being investigated so the reader understands the case.
Then:Describe the clues, evidence, images or events and include information from interviews that help explain what might have happened.
Finally:Reveal the conclusions and explain what the investigation discovered or what parts of the mystery might still remain unsolved.
Let me show you how to plan.
Your Plan: The Mysterious Illustrations of Harris Burdick
Teacher's Plan: The Peculiar Illustrations of Harris Burdick
Example Text: The Curious Illustrations of Harris Burdick
Part 1: Introduction to the mystery
Part 2: Describe first image and Harris Burdick reveals the mystery behind it
What good writing looks like
This will show you how to plan and write
Part 3: Describe second image and Harris Burdick reveals the mystery behind it
Part 4: Describe third image and Harris Burdick reveals the mystery behind it
Part 5: Conclusion: Why did Harris Burdick disappear?
My Turn: Part 1
Your Turn: Part 1
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 2
Your Turn: Part 2
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 3
Your Turn: Part 3
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 4
Your Turn: Part 4
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Turn: Part 5
Your Turn: Part 5
Pictures
What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?
Writer's Knowledge
Words and phrases
WorkingWall
My Completed Plan
Click
Now talk through your plan
Can I plan my Private Investigator Report?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
once
______
he recognises the image.
Burdick smiles
The answer was hidden in plain sight; he points out what most readers have ignored.
__________________________________________
_________________________________