Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smiles
Who/What
illustrator
Sentence
The illustrator smiles.
Add Detail: relative clauses
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________
Re-read
Build
, who recognises the scene,
______________________________________
smiles.
The illustrator
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
reveals
Subject
he
Sentence
He reveals the mystery.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
He reveals the mystery the image finally makes sense.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write an illustration description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
Remember the disappearance of Harris Burdick and how he has contacted the investigating team to share his stories.
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
Illustration 8: Mr Linden’s Library: a girl asleep next to an open book, with leafy vines growing from it
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
What is around them?
How might they say it?
Illustration 8: Mr Linden’s Library: a girl asleep next to an open book, with leafy vines growing from it
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
How might they react?
How will their body move?
My turn to write an illustration description.
Your turn to write an illustration description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write an illustration description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________
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Immerse Lesson 4
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
smiles
Who/What
illustrator
Sentence
The illustrator smiles.
Add Detail: relative clauses
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________
Re-read
Build
, who recognises the scene,
______________________________________
smiles.
The illustrator
Check
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
reveals
Subject
he
Sentence
He reveals the mystery.
Add Detail: semi-colon for independent clauses
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
Re-read
Build
Insert the semi-colon to link the two independent clauses that could stand alone.
Check
He reveals the mystery the image finally makes sense.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write an illustration description?
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
Remember the disappearance of Harris Burdick and how he has contacted the investigating team to share his stories.
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
Illustration 8: Mr Linden’s Library: a girl asleep next to an open book, with leafy vines growing from it
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
How can you show how they feel?
What might they say?
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
What is around them?
How might they say it?
Illustration 8: Mr Linden’s Library: a girl asleep next to an open book, with leafy vines growing from it
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
How might they react?
How will their body move?
My turn to write an illustration description.
Your turn to write an illustration description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write an illustration description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
He reveals the mystery; the image finally makes sense.
___________________________
____________________
, who recognises the scene,
The illustrator
smiles.
______________________________________