Immerse Lesson 2
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
notes
Who/What
Burdick
Sentence
Burdick notes.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the detailed, careful sketch of the shadowed street.
_________________________________________________________________________
Burdick notes
Re-read
Build
the detailed, careful sketch of the shadowed street.
_________________________________________________________________________
Check
Burdick notes
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was chased
Subject
illustrator
Sentence
The illustrator was chased.
Add Detail: active or passive?
Authorities chased the illustrator.
The illustrator was chased by the authorities.
Re-read
Build
Match the active and passive labels to the correct sentence.
ACTIVE
Check
PASSIVE
The illustrator was chased by the authorities.
___________________________________________________________________________
Authorities chased the illustrator.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Vehicle Text?
Drama: Roleplay
Who might have sent you this letter?
Why is it 'highly confidential'?
A Note from Harris Burdick
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
When?
How?
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
Illustration 8: Mr Linden’s Library: a girl asleep next to an open book, with leafy vines growing from it
Book Time
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
Let me read all of 'The Mysteries of Harris Burdick' again focusing on the five illustrations revealed.
How?
When?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
fascinated
skipping
remarkable
bizarre
Hover for definitions!
boy wonder
with all his might
canal
ocean liner
schooner
Your turn to write sentences in role as private investigators using the new vocabulary.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Vehicle Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The illustrator was chased by the authorities.
PASSIVE
Authorities chased the illustrator.
ACTIVE
the detailed, careful sketch of the shadowed street.
_________________________________________________________________________
Burdick notes
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Immerse Lesson 2
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
notes
Who/What
Burdick
Sentence
Burdick notes.
Add Detail: expanded noun phrases
the detailed, careful sketch of the shadowed street.
_________________________________________________________________________
Burdick notes
Re-read
Build
the detailed, careful sketch of the shadowed street.
_________________________________________________________________________
Check
Burdick notes
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was chased
Subject
illustrator
Sentence
The illustrator was chased.
Add Detail: active or passive?
Authorities chased the illustrator.
The illustrator was chased by the authorities.
Re-read
Build
Match the active and passive labels to the correct sentence.
ACTIVE
Check
PASSIVE
The illustrator was chased by the authorities.
___________________________________________________________________________
Authorities chased the illustrator.
___________________________________________________________________________
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Vehicle Text?
Drama: Roleplay
Who might have sent you this letter?
Why is it 'highly confidential'?
A Note from Harris Burdick
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
Illustration 3: A Strange Day in July: two children stood by a sparkling sea, skipping stones
Illustration 7: The Harp: a river and waterfall setting with a harp to the right of the river
Illustration 5: Another Place, Another Time: four characters setting off along a track on a wooden railroad trolley cart with a sail
When?
How?
Illustration 14: The House on Maple Street: a large house on a street at night, lifting off like a rocket
Illustration 8: Mr Linden’s Library: a girl asleep next to an open book, with leafy vines growing from it
Book Time
What?
Who?
Why?
Where?
Let me read all of 'The Mysteries of Harris Burdick' again focusing on the five illustrations revealed.
How?
When?
New words in our book
Hover for definitions!
fascinated
skipping
remarkable
bizarre
Hover for definitions!
boy wonder
with all his might
canal
ocean liner
schooner
Your turn to write sentences in role as private investigators using the new vocabulary.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I understand and use the vocabulary in the Vehicle Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The illustrator was chased by the authorities.
PASSIVE
Authorities chased the illustrator.
ACTIVE
the detailed, careful sketch of the shadowed street.
_________________________________________________________________________
Burdick notes