Y3E The Search for Our Cosmic Neighbours Plan L9

Plan Lesson 9

Sentence Accuracy

Sentence Accuracy

Quick Build: single-clause sentence

Verb

gasped

Who/What

astronaut

The astronaut gasped.

Sentence

Add Detail: inverted commas

"I saw something move,"

the astronaut gasped.

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Build

the astronaut gasped.

"I saw something move,"

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My turn to write the sentence.

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Your turn to write a sentence.

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Combine?

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Quick Build: single-clause sentence

gasped

Verb

she

Who/What

She gasped.

Sentence

Add Detail: speech punctuation

She gasped,

"Did that rock just move?"

Re-read

Build

Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.

She gasped

Did that rock just move

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Check

My turn to write the sentence.

Listen to my writer's voice.

Let me hide it!Now your turn.

Your turn to write a sentence.

Write?

Dictate?

Adapt/Extend?

Combine?

Fix?

Use your Sentence Checker

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Can I choose effective vocabulary and Writer's Knowledge to plan my Exploration Narrative?

How Exploration Narratives Work

First: the explorer arrives in a new and unfamiliar place and begins looking around to discover what is there.

Then:the explorer makes surprising discoveries and explores the new environment more closely.

Finally:the explorer learns something important from the adventure and decides what to do next.

Let me show you how to plan.

Example Text: Exploring the Green Planet

Teacher's Plan: Exploring the Red Planet

Your Plan: Exploring the Pink Planet

Part 1: An astronaut searches for life on final planet of many. Planet is described

Part 2: The astronaut encounters curious aliens. Aliens described

What good writing looks like

This will show you how to plan and write

Part 3: The astronaut explores first underground setting

Part 4: The astronaut explores second underground setting

Part 5: The astronaut learns the aliens’ way of life and decides to stay

My Turn: Part 1

Your Turn: Part 1

Pictures

What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 2

Your Turn: Part 2

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Turn: Part 3

Your Turn: Part 3

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

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My Turn: Part 4

Your Turn: Part 4

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

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My Turn: Part 5

Your Turn: Part 5

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What will you plan? What ideas did you gather?

Writer's Knowledge

Words and phrases

WorkingWall

My Completed Plan

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Now talk through your plan

Can I plan my Exploration Narrative?

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She gasped,

"Did that rock just move?"

"I saw something move,"

the astronaut gasped.