Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a setting description?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
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copy
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My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
Who/What
astronaut
The astronaut sighed.
Sentence
Add Detail: inverted commas
"Last one,"
the astronaut sighed.
Re-read
Build
the astronaut sighed.
"Last one,"
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
astronaut
Who/What
The astronaut sighed.
Sentence
Add Detail: speech punctuation
the astronaut sighed.
"If only I could find life here,"
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
the astronaut sighed
If only I could find life here
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a setting description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's re-read all of 'The Search for Our Cosmic Neighbours'.
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 1:the crew exploring the the pink crystal cavern
Illustration 2:the crew exploring the green mushroom cavern
What would it be like to explore both of the caverns in the illustrations?
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
What might they say?
Illustration:the crew exploring the the pink crystal cavern
How can you show how they feel?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How will their body move?
How might they react?
Illustration:the crew exploring the green mushroom cavern
My turn to write a setting description.
Your turn to write a setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a setting description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the astronaut sighed.
"If only I could find life here,"
"Last one,"
the astronaut sighed.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly.
Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side.
Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat.
Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax.
Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards.
Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically.
Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm.
Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
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Immerse Lesson 4
Can I write a setting description?
Handwriting
Handwriting
palm crouch
thumb push
finger tap
finger lift
R E A D Y
__________________________________________________________________________________________
copy
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________
My Turn
Your Turn
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
Who/What
astronaut
The astronaut sighed.
Sentence
Add Detail: inverted commas
"Last one,"
the astronaut sighed.
Re-read
Build
the astronaut sighed.
"Last one,"
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
sighed
astronaut
Who/What
The astronaut sighed.
Sentence
Add Detail: speech punctuation
the astronaut sighed.
"If only I could find life here,"
Re-read
Build
Drag the punctuation into the sentence to complete it.
the astronaut sighed
If only I could find life here
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I write a setting description?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let's re-read all of 'The Search for Our Cosmic Neighbours'.
Vehicle Text Recap
Illustration 1:the crew exploring the the pink crystal cavern
Illustration 2:the crew exploring the green mushroom cavern
What would it be like to explore both of the caverns in the illustrations?
Step Inside: Bring your scene to life
What might they say?
Illustration:the crew exploring the the pink crystal cavern
How can you show how they feel?
How might they say it?
What is around them?
How will their body move?
How might they react?
Illustration:the crew exploring the green mushroom cavern
My turn to write a setting description.
Your turn to write a setting description.
Use your Sentence Checker
Can I write a setting description?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
the astronaut sighed.
"If only I could find life here,"
"Last one,"
the astronaut sighed.
Curve around, up to the top, down the same line, up and over with a flick at the end.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Frog Jump-Squat down low, hands on the floor. Jump forward and land softly. Elephant Walk-Bend forward, arms hang. Walk and swing arms side to side. Caterpillar Crawl-Walk hands forward, then feet up to hands. Repeat. Turtle Push-Push hands into floor or wall. Hold, then relax. Crab Crouch-Lift hips in crab position. Walk forwards or backwards. Monkey Grab-Reach one arm across the body, then the other. Alternate rhythmically. Seal Clap-Clap in front, above, and below while keeping rhythm. Crocodile Twist-Keep feet still. Twist upper body side to side slowly.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.
Thumb to first finger, press down hard 1, 2, 3, 4. Move to the next, let's do some more 1, 2, 3, 4.