Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
grew
Who/What
walls
Sentence
The walls grew.
Add Detail: Word Families
The walls grew
earthier.
___________
Re-read
Build
The walls grew
earthier.
___________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
tower
Who/What
Sentence
The tower was old.
Add Detail: Noun Choice
place
_______
was their home.
The tower was old but this
Re-read
Build
place
_______
The tower was old but this
was their home.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Our Tower again.
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
drooped
dreary
weary
clambered
Hover for definitions!
thudded
illuminated
beamed
caverns
manhole cover
pulsing
Hover for definitions!
chimneys coughed out smoky sighs
glimmering with emerald veins
longed for a spark of wonder
Let me read the Example Text
My City
One misty morning, a curious girl named Lila leaned against the cracked railings of her city. All around her, the buildings’ broken windows stared with tired eyes. The factories’ chimneys coughed out smoky sighs. The gardens’ flowers drooped as though the grey air had stolen their colour. From where she looked, everything seemed lifeless. She wondered about the world beyond her dreary city. She longed for a spark of wonder beyond the weary roads.
As dusk was creeping in, she noticed a trail of glittering dust leading behind a building. Lila spotted a loose manhole cover. From it, a warm glow was pulsing like a heartbeat. Without hesitation, Lila clambered down its iron ladder to an unusual place. In this underground world, the air shimmered with silver mist and its tunnels’ stone walls glimmered like captured stars. Strange echoes whispered through the caverns, guiding the girl deeper underground. Every few steps, her heart thudded with excitement.
At the deepest chamber, she gasped. A wise figure shaped from moss and moonlight was stood waiting. Leafy vines curled around his shoulders, illuminated by flickering lanterns. “Welcome, young child,” the figure said. His voice was like water over pebbles.
Lila murmured, “Who… who are you?”
“I am the keeper of roots,” he replied with a gentle bow. Around them, fairies fanned a soft breeze that smelled of rain and honey.
Just then, the keeper lifted a small seed that gleamed brighter than a sunrise. “Take this. Plant it where humans’ dreams have been lost. The earth will remember,” he said.
Lila thought of her cold, grey city above. She cupped the glowing gift as it beamed up at her. It was as warm as a smile from a friend. “Will it truly change my city?” she asked.
The root keeper smiled with eyes that sparkled. “Only if you plant it and share its wonders,” he said. Holding the seed tightly, the young adventurer made her way back up to her dull city.
The following sunrise, Lila pressed the glowing seed into a bare patch of soil at the centre of the city. Instantly, shoots of silvery green ivy sprang upwards. They raced along the bricks and buildings. They darted along the pavements’ cracks glimmering with emerald veins. The birds’ songs rang clear and sweet once more. From windows high and low, Lila’s neighbours watched in wonder. “Look!” she called, eyes wide. “This place is alive!” The city seemed to breathe and the air sang. Lila felt the heartbeat of her city echo inside her own.
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Which one tells us that Lila wished for magic?
A the grey air had stolen their colour
B everything seemed lifeless
C she longed for a spark of wonder
D a curious girl named Lila
Tick Me
Lila murmurs, "Who... who are you?" to the root keeper character when she first meets him. What does this show us about Lila?
Tick two
A She is glad to have made a friend underground.
B She is shocked to meet the root keeper.
C She is annoyed that he interrupted her exploring.
Check
D She is cautious and wary of him at first.
Find Me
Which words and phrases make the underground setting seem magical?
The air shimmered with silver mist and its tunnels’ stone walls glimmered like captured stars.
shimmered
silver mist
glimmered like captured stars
Picture Me
Reveal Text
Which image best shows the following description?shoots of silvery green ivy darted along pavements' cracks
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The following sunrise, Lila pressed the glowing seed into a bare patch of soil at the centre of the city. Instantly, shoots of silvery green ivy sprang upwards. They raced along the bricks and buildings. They darted along the pavements’ cracks glimmering with emerald veins.
place
_______
was their home.
The tower was old but this
The walls grew
earthier.
___________
B She is shocked to meet the root keeper.
D She is cautious and wary of him at first.
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Immerse Lesson 3
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
grew
Who/What
walls
Sentence
The walls grew.
Add Detail: Word Families
The walls grew
earthier.
___________
Re-read
Build
The walls grew
earthier.
___________
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
was
tower
Who/What
Sentence
The tower was old.
Add Detail: Noun Choice
place
_______
was their home.
The tower was old but this
Re-read
Build
place
_______
The tower was old but this
was their home.
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write a sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
Book Time
Who?
What?
Where?
Why?
How?
When?
Let me read all of Our Tower again.
Example Text Vocabulary Time
Hover for definitions!
drooped
dreary
weary
clambered
Hover for definitions!
thudded
illuminated
beamed
caverns
manhole cover
pulsing
Hover for definitions!
chimneys coughed out smoky sighs
glimmering with emerald veins
longed for a spark of wonder
Let me read the Example Text
My City
One misty morning, a curious girl named Lila leaned against the cracked railings of her city. All around her, the buildings’ broken windows stared with tired eyes. The factories’ chimneys coughed out smoky sighs. The gardens’ flowers drooped as though the grey air had stolen their colour. From where she looked, everything seemed lifeless. She wondered about the world beyond her dreary city. She longed for a spark of wonder beyond the weary roads.
As dusk was creeping in, she noticed a trail of glittering dust leading behind a building. Lila spotted a loose manhole cover. From it, a warm glow was pulsing like a heartbeat. Without hesitation, Lila clambered down its iron ladder to an unusual place. In this underground world, the air shimmered with silver mist and its tunnels’ stone walls glimmered like captured stars. Strange echoes whispered through the caverns, guiding the girl deeper underground. Every few steps, her heart thudded with excitement.
At the deepest chamber, she gasped. A wise figure shaped from moss and moonlight was stood waiting. Leafy vines curled around his shoulders, illuminated by flickering lanterns. “Welcome, young child,” the figure said. His voice was like water over pebbles. Lila murmured, “Who… who are you?” “I am the keeper of roots,” he replied with a gentle bow. Around them, fairies fanned a soft breeze that smelled of rain and honey.
Just then, the keeper lifted a small seed that gleamed brighter than a sunrise. “Take this. Plant it where humans’ dreams have been lost. The earth will remember,” he said. Lila thought of her cold, grey city above. She cupped the glowing gift as it beamed up at her. It was as warm as a smile from a friend. “Will it truly change my city?” she asked. The root keeper smiled with eyes that sparkled. “Only if you plant it and share its wonders,” he said. Holding the seed tightly, the young adventurer made her way back up to her dull city.
The following sunrise, Lila pressed the glowing seed into a bare patch of soil at the centre of the city. Instantly, shoots of silvery green ivy sprang upwards. They raced along the bricks and buildings. They darted along the pavements’ cracks glimmering with emerald veins. The birds’ songs rang clear and sweet once more. From windows high and low, Lila’s neighbours watched in wonder. “Look!” she called, eyes wide. “This place is alive!” The city seemed to breathe and the air sang. Lila felt the heartbeat of her city echo inside her own.
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Which One's Right?
Which one tells us that Lila wished for magic?
A the grey air had stolen their colour
B everything seemed lifeless
C she longed for a spark of wonder
D a curious girl named Lila
Tick Me
Lila murmurs, "Who... who are you?" to the root keeper character when she first meets him. What does this show us about Lila?
Tick two
A She is glad to have made a friend underground.
B She is shocked to meet the root keeper.
C She is annoyed that he interrupted her exploring.
Check
D She is cautious and wary of him at first.
Find Me
Which words and phrases make the underground setting seem magical?
The air shimmered with silver mist and its tunnels’ stone walls glimmered like captured stars.
shimmered
silver mist
glimmered like captured stars
Picture Me
Reveal Text
Which image best shows the following description?shoots of silvery green ivy darted along pavements' cracks
Can I understand the Example Text and its vocabulary?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
The following sunrise, Lila pressed the glowing seed into a bare patch of soil at the centre of the city. Instantly, shoots of silvery green ivy sprang upwards. They raced along the bricks and buildings. They darted along the pavements’ cracks glimmering with emerald veins.
place
_______
was their home.
The tower was old but this
The walls grew
earthier.
___________
B She is shocked to meet the root keeper.
D She is cautious and wary of him at first.