Analyse Lesson 6
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
approach
Who/What
explorers
Sentence
Explorers approach.
Add Detail: conjunctions
when
_______
Explorers must be careful
they approach.
Re-read
Build
Explorers must be careful
they approach.
when
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
look
Who/What
whales
Sentence
The whales look tiny.
Add Detail: pronouns
The starfish are so enormous that
make whales look tiny.
they
______
Re-read
Build
they
______
make whales look tiny.
The starfish are so enormous that
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s
Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Addressing the reader
Expanded noun phrases
Effective verbs
Text structure
Features
Secret Sea Creature Guide: The Octopus Family
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
Paragraph
Title
Addressing the reader
Effective verbs
Expanded noun phrases
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Effective adjectives
Topic sentences
Technical words
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Topic sentences
Let me show you
Reveal
Match the topic sentence to the subheading it replaces.
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives.
Introduction
Welcome, ocean explorer!
Diet
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage.
Habitat
Fascinating Facts
To attract their prey, the whole household works together.
Topic sentences
Let's find and discuss
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Topic sentences
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Effective adjectives
Topic sentences
Technical words
Let me show you
Technical words
Drag the technical words into the correct sentence.
tentacles
molluscs
anglerfish
Eight gangly writhe around.
Two patient dangle their glowing lights.
These marvellous can match their surroundings.
Reveal
Technical words
Let's find and discuss
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Technical words
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Effective adjectives
Topic sentences
Technical words
Effective adjectives
Let me show you
Drag the adjectives into the ocean.
unusual
seabed
remarkable
plankton
polished
cosiest
hatchlings
Reveal
Effective adjectives
Let's find and discuss
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Effective adjectives
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Picture Me
Which image best shows this topic sentence?
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage.
Odd One Out
Which of these is not a technical word for a sea creature guide?
B seabed
A tentacles
D cosy
C camouflage
Yes or No?Do these phrases include adjectives to describe nouns?
A unusual appearance
Yes
No
No
B creatures to discover
Yes
C youngsters perch on a footstool
Yes
No
D remarkable sea creatures
Yes
No
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
when
_______
Explorers must be careful
they approach.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
The starfish are so enormous that
make whales look tiny.
they
______
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
unusual
remarkable
cosiest
polished
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
tentacles
anglerfish
molluscs
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.
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Analyse Lesson 6
Sentence Accuracy
Sentence Accuracy
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
approach
Who/What
explorers
Sentence
Explorers approach.
Add Detail: conjunctions
when
_______
Explorers must be careful
they approach.
Re-read
Build
Explorers must be careful
they approach.
when
_______
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Quick Build: single-clause sentence
Verb
look
Who/What
whales
Sentence
The whales look tiny.
Add Detail: pronouns
The starfish are so enormous that
make whales look tiny.
they
______
Re-read
Build
they
______
make whales look tiny.
The starfish are so enormous that
___________________________________________________________________________
Check
My turn to write the sentence.
Listen to my writer's voice.
Let me hide it!Now your turn.
Your turn to write a sentence.
Write?
Dictate?
Adapt/Extend?
Combine?
Fix?
Use your Sentence Checker
Sentence time over! Click to move on.
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
Let's take a quick look at how the Example Text is presented and the features it has.
The Example Text has...
Paragraphs
Title
Addressing the reader
Expanded noun phrases
Effective verbs
Text structure
Features
Secret Sea Creature Guide: The Octopus Family
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
Paragraph
Title
Addressing the reader
Effective verbs
Expanded noun phrases
Click on / Click off
Writer's Knowledge
Effective adjectives
Topic sentences
Technical words
Let's work in:
Stations
Pairs
Groups
Topic sentences
Let me show you
Reveal
Match the topic sentence to the subheading it replaces.
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives.
Introduction
Welcome, ocean explorer!
Diet
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage.
Habitat
Fascinating Facts
To attract their prey, the whole household works together.
Topic sentences
Let's find and discuss
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Topic sentences
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Effective adjectives
Topic sentences
Technical words
Let me show you
Technical words
Drag the technical words into the correct sentence.
tentacles
molluscs
anglerfish
Eight gangly writhe around.
Two patient dangle their glowing lights.
These marvellous can match their surroundings.
Reveal
Technical words
Let's find and discuss
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Technical words
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Writer's Knowledge
Effective adjectives
Topic sentences
Technical words
Effective adjectives
Let me show you
Drag the adjectives into the ocean.
unusual
seabed
remarkable
plankton
polished
cosiest
hatchlings
Reveal
Effective adjectives
Let's find and discuss
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
Reveal
Replace?
Remove?
Feel
Imagine
Your Turn: Which paragraphs will you look at?
Effective adjectives
Imagine Feel Replace? Remove?
Reveal
Question Quiz Time
Secret Selector
Team Competition
How will we answer our questions today?
Vote
ThumbsUp
ThinkPair Share
Bob Up
Picture Me
Which image best shows this topic sentence? The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage.
Odd One Out
Which of these is not a technical word for a sea creature guide?
B seabed
A tentacles
D cosy
C camouflage
Yes or No?Do these phrases include adjectives to describe nouns?
A unusual appearance
Yes
No
No
B creatures to discover
Yes
C youngsters perch on a footstool
Yes
No
D remarkable sea creatures
Yes
No
Can I find and discuss Writer’s Knowledge 5-7 in the Example Text?
CEW
Handwriting
Writing Effects
Spelling
Ideas
Other...
Feedback: Who did what well?
when
_______
Explorers must be careful
they approach.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
The starfish are so enormous that
make whales look tiny.
they
______
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
unusual
remarkable
cosiest
polished
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
Welcome, ocean explorer! If you are reading this, you have found the scroll of secret information in the bottle along with the underwater camera! Within this guide, there are many fascinating creatures to discover, but this one is a surprise you will not expect. Hidden deep beneath the waves, the Octopus Family Living Room remains a mystery that few humans have ever seen. Long ago, a removal van was tossed from a ship in a storm and it sank to the sandy ocean floor. Nearby octopuses were somehow able to drag every armchair, sofa and lamp from the wreckage and arrange them into the cosiest sitting room!
tentacles
anglerfish
molluscs
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
This specially arranged room is where the octopus family lives. Underneath the furniture, the seabed is carpeted with crumbly sand. Sofas are anchored by coral bricks and armchairs lean against rocks. Their coffee table rests neatly on a patch of soft sponge. Overhead, gentle currents carry seaweed that sways like curtains in a watery breeze. Beyond the cosy lamplight, the vast ocean is dark and wild. They are hidden from view amongst the enclosed coral bed. The sunken removal van provides a perfect escape for whenever danger approaches.
The most astonishing thing of all is their talent for camouflage. With a single thought, these marvellous molluscs can match their surroundings, so what appears to look like a sofa cushion might be a blinking eye! If you ever explore a shipwreck, beware… an inviting underwater living room scene might not be what it seems.
These remarkable eight-armed sea creatures have an unusual appearance. This octopus family slouch comfortably into their surroundings. Sprawled across padded cushions, eight gangly tentacles writhe around with minds of their own. Three little hatchlings wait with eager eyes that gleam like polished shells. The family’s shifting colours are a swirl of pearly blue with spots of seaweed green.
To attract their prey, the whole household works together to create a calm and inviting space. The biggest octopus reads a story from a sunken book while the three tiny youngsters perch on the footstool to listen. Rather cleverly, the octopus family organise for two patient anglerfish to dangle their glowing lights. With the lamps lit for storytelling, shoals of fish and smaller creatures arrive and huddle across the sofa. All seems cosy and calm… until the rush of forty tentacles snaffle fish, plankton and crabs into eager beaks.